Living as I please, As a Loli Demon King

by Waxford

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One day, Ryusei Homura and all his classmates are transported to another world where they are asked to help in defeating the 12 Demon Kings. Ryusei was always looked at as an idiot, a weirdo and a pervert who always stares at girls’ breasts. He was always bullied and beaten up after school. Even after the summoning, he ends up being the weakest in his class. And eventually, in the midst of a battle: "We don't need to look after trash like you. You're just a burden, so die!"

Ryusei was killed by one of his classmates. As everything turns dark for him, the Demon God offers him a deal: "I can give you a second chance. I will make you a Demon King. I will give you power. You will be able to get revenge and live your life as you please!"

But there was one thing the Demon God didn't mention to Ryusei, and when he woke up: "WHAT!? Why the hell am I a loli!?"

Now Ryusei must live as the Demon King of Insanity, Milla Walpurgis.

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Pure Degenerate Wish Fulfillment and Proud to be so.

Overall: 4/5

This is not an epic fantasy story with deep character arcs and high stakes, but it doesn’t pretend to be. This is light, fluffy, perverted, wish fulfillment, and it's a surprisingly entertaining read.

Style: 3/5

This is one of the story’s weaknesses. The prose feels awkward, somewhat detached from characters. Things feel rushed, and not fully described. There seems to be a lot more telling than showing. Sometimes, this is a good thing. Things never drag on for too long. Sometimes it’s bad, since it feels like we’re not experiencing the events of the story from the characters’ perspectives. It's a bit like reading a summary of the events instead.

It’s all perfectly readable, and better than many stories I’ve seen on RR. The fight scenes are also well done for the most part. The excessive use to telling versus showing seems to be mostly during the quieter scenes, or scenes where the protagonist is inventing something new.

Story: 5/5

This story is simple and filled with tropes, but it’s well executed. Sometimes tropes are good. The story knows what it wants to be. It’s not trying to challenge your expectations. So far it seems to be good, fun, fluffy wish fulfillment.

The plot is surprisingly good so far, and it’s developing at a good pace. Nothing feels contrived so far. The story is consistent and obeys it’s own rules that it sets up. The protagonist’s tricks and ways of outmaneuvering her enemies are actually clever. They’re well thought out and plausible within the context of the world.

Grammar: 4.5/5

I noticed very few grammar errors, but there were a few glaring spelling errors and mistakes with homophones. (eg: Using the word “hole” instead of “whole”)

Characters: 4/5

The protagonist is great. I went into the story expecting to read about Mister Generic Otaku Isekai Protagonist and was pleasantly surprised. This guy has balls! Well, not literal balls… not anymore. She’s willing to assert herself and impose her will on others. She’s not a purely evil bitch, but she’s also not a boring vanilla doormat protagonist. She's selfish, perverted, and has no problem using her power to get what she wants.

There are a colorful variety of other characters, but they mostly feel flat compared to the protagonist. They’re fairly one dimensional and fit neatly into various trope categories, doing little to subvert expectations or show depth outside their character archetype. The villains in particular seem almost arbitrarily evil with no real motivation behind their actions. The flat characters do match the lighthearted tone of the story though.

Also, the author obviously has a fetish for big boobies, and I'm not one to kinkshame, but he needs to add some variety! The itty-bitty-titty-committee is underrepresented! Small busted girls for the win! Flat is justice.

Micah Henderson
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I Love Your Writing So Cool And Easy To Read My Friend And Pal!

 

EvilynnThales
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I love having a MC that isn't an impossibly innocent and oblivious self insert. Being upset, but deciding to just go with it and have fun makes for a much more entertaining MC. :)

ranaltor
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There isn't much to say it's just so good and I want more chapters if this is your first book keep on writing your story is better than some jp light novels I've read off of Amazon

Don Wihongi
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feels like another angry degenerate story...

This story isn't poorly written or even bad, but it has the overall feeling that it soon will be. the protag for starters once they die,(from cliche revenge fodder) is completely overpowered (never a good sign for the quality of plot and pacing). and then, of course, they are reborn as a girl and have an obvious desire for the same sex, and the fact that they were apparently a pervert at heart is not at all endearing (a solid protag is likable or at the very least understandable, usually possessing some positive traits or a decent point of empathy, sloppy revenge doesn't count). So yes this book doesn't seem too bad for now, but it shows worrying signs of book garbage.

This story requires one not minding the protag being a lustful scourge to everyone, to stomach with any semblance of pleasure (that is if you have any standards). so if you read this and like it good for you, I personally can't stomach it (the protag is too awful, I can tolerate villainous protags but not straight up degenerates with little self-control). so to all those who rate this story 5 stars, I sadly disagree.

Also, I hope that royal road gets more tags in the descriptions so that people can more accurately tag their books.

Andrew Meyers
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Arifureta, except he became a loli demon king instead of an OP gunslinger

 Not bad, feels like an Arifureta spin-off where he became a loli Demon King instead. I can't wait to see how the story develops in the future, but so far these three initial chapters are quite good (other than the weird font formatting error that makes it seem huge, but that's just a font issue).