Living as I please, As a Loli Demon King

by Waxford

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Gender Bender Harem High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos Portal Fantasy / Isekai Secret Identity Strong Lead Supernatural
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One day, Ryusei Homura and all his classmates are transported to another world where they are asked to help in defeating the 12 Demon Kings. Ryusei was always looked at as an idiot, a weirdo and a pervert who always stares at girls’ breasts. He was always bullied and beaten up after school. Even after the summoning, he ends up being the weakest in his class. And eventually, in the midst of a battle: "We don't need to look after trash like you. You're just a burden, so die!"

Ryusei was killed by one of his classmates. As everything turns dark for him, the Demon God offers him a deal: "I can give you a second chance. I will make you a Demon King. I will give you power. You will be able to get revenge and live your life as you please!"

But there was one thing the Demon God didn't mention to Ryusei, and when he woke up: "WHAT!? Why the hell am I a loli!?"

Now Ryusei must live as the Demon King of Insanity, Milla Walpurgis.

This novel will be discontinued here on Royal Road. I am moving it to scribble hub. Search for it there and you will find it

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1: Prologue - Betrayal, Death and a Second Chance ago
2: The day I became a loli ago
3: Testing the power of a loli ago
4: First bath and hidden schemes ago
5: A new home and holy mission ago
6: Preparations for the fated night ago
7: Let the games begin! ago
8: Check Mate! ago
9: Inside the Ice Queen's heart ago
10: Visiting the land of ice ago
11: Demon King vs Demon King ago
12: Another strange situation ago
13: The reason behind the war and 2nd bath ago
14: Quality time and shocking news ago
15: A bloody battlefield ago
16: Finding the solution ago
17: Reunion ago
18: We have a deal ago
19: Invitation into darkness ago
20: Fall of the Walpurgis clan ago
21: To the land of vampires ago
22: Let's buy a loli! ago
23: Fatal mistake ago
24: Unstoppable Milla ago
25: Consequences ago
26: Babysitter Lorina ago
27: Mecha Momoyo ago
28: Wrapping things up ago
29: Unusual military inspection ago
30: Meeting ago
31: War Council ago
32: What needs to be done ago
33: Chasing a Prince away ago
34: Mommy Milla and dog Momoyo ago
35: Preparations ago
36: Persia Castella ago
37: Final preparations before the war ago
38: Playtime and secret weapon ago
39: Nightmare ago
39.5: An isekai Christmas ago
40: On the 6th day... ago
41: Grace vs Ren ago
42: A loli descends ago
43: The results of training ago
44: Revenge ago
45: Angel and Demon ago
46: Desperate Milla ago
47: Can a loli challenge a God? ago
48: Milla and Milla ago
49: The Demon God's miracle ago
50: The new Shiori ago
51: Even a loli can go on a date ago
52: Lorina's sorrow and conquering Shiori ago
53: Was it just a dream? ago
54: Deep within the mountain ago
55: Milla and the Empress ago
56: Ornis Balmund ago
57: A loli breaks the trap ago
58: Keeping a promise hurts ago
59: Back to reality ago
60: I want to be a loli again ago

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JustSmile
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Unimaginative and derivative. Not specifically bad - quite readable in fact - but creatively bankrupt. The same story and the same characters you've seen in every single piece of Japanese wn "writing" in the last decade or so. Church bad, humans bad (unless mc's ally), demons good (unless mc's enemy), mc's enemies dumb and despicably evil, mc's allies smart and virtuous, the definite sign of an otherworlder is kanji and asian features because only Japan gets isekaied. Blah blah blah, every trope ever repeat ad nauseam. If it's supposed to be satire on novels of this kind it fails. 

 

Still, to repeat: very much readable. No major issues with grammar or style, the thing's written relatively fine if we discount the story. A good choice if you have a few minutes to spend, but don't particularly want to pay attention or think too much.

Bloop9
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Do they mass produce these? Just change the names of the characters and your an author, apparently.

Spectacular
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Pure Degenerate Wish Fulfillment and Proud to be so.

Reviewed at: Quality time and shocking news

Overall: 4/5

This is not an epic fantasy story with deep character arcs and high stakes, but it doesn’t pretend to be. This is light, fluffy, perverted, wish fulfillment, and it's a surprisingly entertaining read.

Style: 3/5

This is one of the story’s weaknesses. The prose feels awkward, somewhat detached from characters. Things feel rushed, and not fully described. There seems to be a lot more telling than showing. Sometimes, this is a good thing. Things never drag on for too long. Sometimes it’s bad, since it feels like we’re not experiencing the events of the story from the characters’ perspectives. It's a bit like reading a summary of the events instead.

It’s all perfectly readable, and better than many stories I’ve seen on RR. The fight scenes are also well done for the most part. The excessive use to telling versus showing seems to be mostly during the quieter scenes, or scenes where the protagonist is inventing something new.

Story: 5/5

This story is simple and filled with tropes, but it’s well executed. Sometimes tropes are good. The story knows what it wants to be. It’s not trying to challenge your expectations. So far it seems to be good, fun, fluffy wish fulfillment.

The plot is surprisingly good so far, and it’s developing at a good pace. Nothing feels contrived so far. The story is consistent and obeys it’s own rules that it sets up. The protagonist’s tricks and ways of outmaneuvering her enemies are actually clever. They’re well thought out and plausible within the context of the world.

Grammar: 4.5/5

I noticed very few grammar errors, but there were a few glaring spelling errors and mistakes with homophones. (eg: Using the word “hole” instead of “whole”)

Characters: 4/5

The protagonist is great. I went into the story expecting to read about Mister Generic Otaku Isekai Protagonist and was pleasantly surprised. This guy has balls! Well, not literal balls… not anymore. She’s willing to assert herself and impose her will on others. She’s not a purely evil bitch, but she’s also not a boring vanilla doormat protagonist. She's selfish, perverted, and has no problem using her power to get what she wants.

There are a colorful variety of other characters, but they mostly feel flat compared to the protagonist. They’re fairly one dimensional and fit neatly into various trope categories, doing little to subvert expectations or show depth outside their character archetype. The villains in particular seem almost arbitrarily evil with no real motivation behind their actions. The flat characters do match the lighthearted tone of the story though.

Also, the author obviously has a fetish for big boobies, and I'm not one to kinkshame, but he needs to add some variety! The itty-bitty-titty-committee is underrepresented! Small busted girls for the win! Flat is justice.

Andrew Meyers
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Arifureta, except he became a loli demon king instead of an OP gunslinger

 Not bad, feels like an Arifureta spin-off where he became a loli Demon King instead. I can't wait to see how the story develops in the future, but so far these three initial chapters are quite good (other than the weird font formatting error that makes it seem huge, but that's just a font issue).

Nyx Wylde
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I love having a MC that isn't an impossibly innocent and oblivious self insert. Being upset, but deciding to just go with it and have fun makes for a much more entertaining MC. :)

Micah Henderson
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I Love Your Writing So Cool And Easy To Read My Friend And Pal!

 

ranaltor
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There isn't much to say it's just so good and I want more chapters if this is your first book keep on writing your story is better than some jp light novels I've read off of Amazon