The Colour Chronicles

by Lazy Empress

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Psychological Female Lead Low Fantasy Slice of Life Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Four children who were assumed to be demons. They were locked up their entire life, until they finally broke free.

Blue, one of the children, has to survive while the world is set against her. It doesn’t matter if she’s actually a demon or not, the people fear her regardless of the truth. Just when she thinks it’s hopeless, she meets April.

The longer she spends with April the more she finds out about herself and and her new friend. Follow the story of Blue, slowly gathering all the pieces to find the reason for her existence.

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JeanDRacc
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An Interesting Mystery

Hi there! 

I am a raccoon inside a trashcan. 

I did a beta read to this novel, and that's why I can tell it is very good stuff if you like mystery. I like to motivate stories I like, so that authors can grow them with motivation and happiness. Nothing better than helping them before they become renown. 

I like this story a lot, and cant wait for the author to publish more. It's a puzzle story, where mystery and personalities intermix. Very creative in my opinion till I have read. 

Style: Mostly dialogue based with characters and intriguing style. The author does research before worldbuilding which is a plus, it also shows in the selection of some words. 

Grammar: Very good and more than enough to not give me one of those headaches where you want to skip. 

Story score: A story with mystery/puzzle plot needs a developed plot apart from the usual action. This one has it and includes well defined characters that make it more interesting. 

Character score: We have many characters in the story, till now our most important one is Sam/Blue. We will see her growth and development around the other characters while we try to unravel a mystery of souls. 

Conclusion:

Intriguing story with a entertaining and complex mystery/puzzle that will keep you wanting to know more. My suggestion is to follow it and read. Remember to leave the author some signatures in different 'colours' aka comments. If you like the story review it or rate. 

 

 

Akuamane
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Dark but interesting

Though there is a heavy darkness in this book there is an optimism that is brought through interaction with the characters. And unlike this choppy review there is a flow throughout this story that keeps you craving for more, just like the raccoon above who is always lusting after pizza, even going as far as selling hoophy's dungeon core for it. (The raccoon is above my review aotm, hopefully it won't stay that way)