I was Born the Unloved Twin

by CCmei

Original ONGOING Comedy Drama Fantasy Psychological Female Lead Low Fantasy Reincarnation Slice of Life Strategy
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You've probably heard this sort of story before.

 

Once upon a time, blah blah blah a boy and a girl fell love and everything was beautiful and perfect, except for this thing called life getting in their way. 

He was this cool foreign prince and she was basically perfect. Really it's a very boring run of the mill story. I'll even spoil it for you, they kill the villianness at the end.

Not the type of story I'd read personally.


So where do I fit into this?

Apparetly I'm her older twin sister and the very very lucky fiance to the foreign prince. You know, the dead villianness? Sucks I know. 

Now I get to do it all over again from the beginning.

Curse my life

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Andrew Meyers
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Heartwarming Second Chance at Life

Very heartwarming and it feels like a native English version of "But God Forced Me to Reincarnate," but so far we're only in the early parts of life and only have ten chapters to go on.

Style: Well paced, fairly good flow to the narrative.

Grammar: Good, a small number of typos or incorrect punctuation here and there (poleite instead of polite). Otherwise easy to read.

Characters: Excellent so far, we'll see how they develop.

Story: We're at chapter 10, but so far it seems pretty good. I'm hooked unless there are some seriously dynamic changes in the story I'll probably read through to the end.

Nuux
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It has some of the cliche reincarnations into an Otome typesetting, but not a lot. You can grow to like the main character since she's rather naive and cute still even if it's a second life, and fits right well with the story.

As the other person that reviewed has some good points... so I will just say my views on it.

Style: like the other person stated it's paced pretty well and you can get the narrative of the story quite easily. the other backgrounds in the story aren't superimposed on, nor is there a lot of un-needed filler. at least of right now.

Grammar: well I am not a good judge on this... but it's decent probably better than mine at least so let's just go with the other persons view on it minor errors here and there and easy to read unlike some stories around these parts.

Characters: all of them seem to have some uniqueness to them. None seems to be too... marry jane type as of yet. Has a good setting to even develop the side characters or other leads though it doesn't concentrate on them too much, at least you can spot minor development from the way the story is narrated.

Story: seems to be planed out, for the most part, I am only on chapter 19 as far as it goes so far and it seems to pick up on other characters motives, not by a lot but it can get you hooked with the first few chapters.