The Final Draft

The Final Draft

by citizenscribe

This is basically the story of a farmer turning cats loose to wipe out mice that are stealing food.

Except the farmer is an intergalactic empire, the mice are rebels and space pirates, and the cats are randomly chosen humans from present-day Earth.

Margaret was one of the fortunate few to be selected, drafted to fight on an alien planet for overlords she never knew existed. Dropped onto a fantasy world where things like toilets are nonexistent, how does an architect/engineer fight back? By building, of course.

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Necrontyr525
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Intentionaly not going for the OP MC route, and instead focusing on tossing a civil engineer into an area she does best in? Heck yes! 

Techman
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Promising summoned hero litrpg

Reviewed at: 6. Builder Building Buildings

Only 6 chapters, but really enjoyable so far. Creative explanation of the RPG system, MC is intelligent but not OP hyper-competent, likable characters. I also enjoy the balance of both individual skills and settlement-planning.

All in all, an enjoyable read that I am happy to follow.