Original ONGOING Contemporary Fantasy Dungeon Low Fantasy School Life Supernatural

Ethan Russell has always been poor, but up into now it hasn’t made him stand out.  That changes when he wins a financial scholarship to the elite Hinan Academy in the small coastal town of Misty Oaks. 

While the school is amazing not everything in town is as it seems.  Strange creatures are appearing all around town while rumors of missing people run rampant and deep beneath the school is something that will change Ethan forever

…if he can survive long enough. 

 

Thanks for checking out my young adult school-life fantasy: Dungeon Academy.  Please leave any feedback you have as I do read your opinions and ultimately they help make my books better.  

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DaftWully
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First chapter has me hooked.

Only read the first chapter so far, but the story certainly has me hooked.  The author did an excellent job of grabbing my attention and setting a good pace for the story.  The Grammar is good, and there was never a point where I lost the flow of the story due to technical issues. 

I look forward to following this story.

FrostPrism
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Currently on chapter 3 and the story is not bad. I would recommend others to read and my only issue with it is the grammar. Throughout the chapters, you can find several errors where the author used the wrong words or messed up the name of the character doing an action. But other than that I see no issues with the story. I'll update this review the farther I get into it.

Horriblememewriting
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It’s a decent story about an academy built above a dungeon. Characters are relatively stereotypical and cliche with personalities that fit their character archetype. Story revolves around your traditional teenagers balancing hero and average high school life story. MC is the righteous hot-head who stumbles into the dungeon and gains powers. A plain, simple, relatively typical high school drama story that can be entertaining. Grammar is great and descriptions are fleshed out. Overall a decent story, just that it is your typical teenagers high school drama with a talking dungeon and a mystery mixed in.