The Coffee Shop

The Coffee Shop

by Rudexvirus

Samantha had owned her own coffee shop for most of her adult life.  As she began to desire a change in her life, a loyal regular approached her, offering her immortality.  

 

The deal was only that she had to continue to run the shop, making him coffee and living her life.  But as time went on, the world began to shift around her, revealing that the catch was much bigger than he revealed. 

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