My Sister The Villainess

by Anoncommander

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Harem High Fantasy Male Lead Reincarnation Villainous Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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Tell me, what does one do when they discover they were reincarnated into an Otome game as the villainess' playboy older brother?

Of course I had always been aware of my situation as a reincarnated person, but it was only when my sister's engagement to the Crown Prince was announced that I finally encountered a piece of my first life after all these years.

I thought, "Hey, this is exactly the same situation as that Otome game I was playing that day!"

But wait. My sister becomes the evil, hated villainess whose fate doesn't ends well at all, you say? As if I'd allow that!

The protagonist wants to steal your man and ruin you? Too arrogant! This daddy(brother) will mess her up good!

I'll completely crush all the people that want to harm my precious, adorable little sister!

Just fall in love with the Crown Prince and achieve your happiness, my sweet sister!

This is such a story.

...Except my sister seems to be a blooming bro-con? And the heroine keeps looking at me funny...

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If you guys like my story and want me to continue writing for a long, long time then feel free to donate, like, a dollar and help support my soda addiction. 

 

Or maybe I should stick with Agua de Sandia drinks. Y'all ever have one of those before? Basically watermelon juice with ice, sugar, and sometimes other flavorings.

 Fucking. Amazing. You should try it. Report back. 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Glossary ago
Prologue ago
Engagement? ago
Love Orgy ago
Arrival ago
Snap It Off ago
Side Story: Bird? Dog? Dragon? ago
Charlotte ago
The First Daughter ago
When Upset, Papa Says Things He Doesn't Mean ago
Proposing To A Queen, Stealing Her Husband (Pt. 1) ago
Proposing To A Queen, Stealing Her Husband (Pt. 2) ago
Make Crusades Great Again ago
Saint-Hero Damien, Angel Extraordinaire ago
A Tale Of Two Princesses (pt. 1) ago
A Tale Of Two Princesses (pt. 2) ago
The Dragon Race's Unfortunate Circumstances ago
Settling Accounts Before Leaving ago
Holy Artifact? No Thanks ago
Side Story: Vera's Treasure ago
Side Story: Dolly's New Rival ago
Owing The Hero One Holy Sword ago
Getting Kicked Out ago
Side Story: Minnie's Sinful Heart ago
No One Ever Expects... ago
King Of Hearts ago
It's Not Me, Its You ago
Mercy ago
Tale Of The Dragon God ago
Unexpected Visitors (pt.1) ago
Unexpected Visitors (pt.2) ago
Another, Barkeep ago
Fun Time With Bubbles-Sensei ago
Oh Boy Here I Go Killing Again ago
There Can Be Only One ago
A Humble Merchant Of Herbs And Spices ago
Side Story: Not Such A Bad Dragon? ago
I'll Build my Own Cartel, With Blackjack And Hookers ago
You Didn't Know It, But He's A Siscon ago
A King-Sized Blunt ago
What Goes Up Must Come Down ago
Side Story: Vera's Golden Heart ago
Ten Steps Back ago
Time To Make Some Magic ago
Side Story: Dahlia The Great ago
The Modest Beginnings Of The Great Milf Empire ago
You've Done It Again (pt. 1) ago
You've Done It Again (pt. 2) ago
Lock The Door ago
All In A Day's Work ago
How To Fund An Empire ago
Love Is... ago
We've Come To Steal The Groom! ago
In The End, Only Fatties Are Loyal ago
What The Cinnamon Toast Fuck Is Going On? ago
Allow Me To Explain (pt. 1) ago
Allow Me To Explain (pt. 2) ago
Damien's Own Little Piece Of Heaven ago
I Am Mad Scientist ago
Feeding Lolies And Planting A Tree ago
#TeamTree ago
See That Girl Over There? That's What Happiness Looks Like ago
Honest Feelings ago
Preparations For War ago
The Mysterious Futa ago
Reunion Between Man And Frog ago
How's The Leg? ago
The Son And Daughter ago
Him Again? ago
Brocon Villainess Meets Stalker Heroine ago
When Are We Gonna Do Lewd Things? ago
Are You Challenging Me? ago
Not So Innocent After All ago
Side Story: A White Christmas ago
You Sure About That? ago
In The Name Of Science, Equality And Head Pats ago
And We Woulda Gotten Away With It Too... ago
Welcome To The DAA ago
Side story: Absolutely Not Stalking ago
Let's Work Hard Together ago
After All, You Need Three Trees (木) To Make A Wood (森) ago
A Date With The Devil ago
Reckless Seeding ago
There's Only One Route Towards Happiness, And That Is... ago
Sleeping With Both Mother And Daughter ago
Alright, Let's Hear it: Who Raped me? ago

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Stephen Lewis
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Current as of July 17 2019

Easy chill read 

Ok so there is problems with this story it's a bit cringey at times and sometimes it doesn't flow well and the grammer sucks sometimes 

But if you can get past those things it's not bad 

I enjoyed the story

moop
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Every chapter I laugh so hard. Just wish he would lose his v card . But I can wait

Honudes Gai
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It has so much potential, if it was just written by someone a little older that wasnt born into "meme" culture...

it would probably be as good as "My death flags show no sign of ending" and "Trash of the count family" if he just wasnt so cringe with dialog

So many points you will actually be enjoying the story to be ruined by the 14 year olds first "memes" level of writing

the character is suppose to have died at 22, remember that if you decide to read this

re:live
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Ok, I noticed that no one has written an actual in-depth review yet. Just to be clear, I'm going to try and make this as objective as possible (a.k.a. not calling the novel something disrespectful because my vocabulary isn't big enough to articulate any complex thoughts). While I do like the story, I don't want to shy away from it's bad spots, and while I think some parts are bad, I'm not going to hate on it because it's not my cup of tea. Without further ado...

Style: 3.5

It's definitely not bad in any sense of the word, but I do find the style to be a little lacking. Granted, this is my own opinion, but I think that the way everything flows is a bit too chaotic for any coherent plot to form. Nothing ever really gets described or figured out to its entirety, and there's some guesswork that goes into figuring out what the deeper plot is in any given arc. The story itself is mostly carried by the humor within its pages, and even that is, at some times, jarring and inappropriate for the situation.

Story: 2.5

Again, not bad, but definitely not great. As stated previously, there's not much coherent story going on. Plus, what's left of any intriguing story is immediately taken away by the writer themselves. There are no consequences for our MC starting from very early on, and it doesn't take a genius to figure out that there will probably never be any. While there is the constant threat of 'so and so' doing 'whatever,' no harm will ever befall our MC because they are omnipotent, despite any and all claims to the contrary. This takes a lot of the fun of reading the story away from me, because I already know the outcome.

Character Score: 5

I know what you're thinking. "How can you give the other sections a low score and then give character a 5?" Well, darling, he's the whole damn show. Our MC is unapologetically true to his desires, and his madness just feeds into that even more. It's refreshing to see an MC stay so chaotic that he does as he pleases, regardless of the consequences around him. His character is honestly one of the only reasons I keep coming back to read the novel, and he's such a hedonist that it's fun to read what he'll do next.

Grammar: 3.5

Going over each chapter you'll find some mistakes, however, it is definitely nowhere near, 'unreadable,' and anyone with half a brain can piece together the authors intent. However, that doesn't excuse the mistakes that are there.

Overall Score: 3.5

While this isn't a boring story in laymans terms, it doesn't require much critical thought from its readers to enjoy. Think of it as a fun way to pass the time. 

Tranquilmoth
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Obliterated expectations.

It's filled with good refrences, and plenty of jokes. I found the whole experience to be pretty damn funny. Not many errors that I noticed or any that really bothered me. Good read, desperately want more of this masterpiece.

ceallach
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Best whimsical OP trainwreck roller coaster I've read in ages!

Fastus
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Ok, like I said in the title I mostly read this because I find it fun. I also read this beacuse I wanted to see the ero scenes but 1. He still hasnt had sex and 2. What he did (wich is basically everything but sticking it in) wasn't really written well, mostly because it was very summarized and not very detailed, wich isn't really a bad thing, since too much will turn it in an ero novel, but 1 or 2 well made sex scenes from time to time wouldn't be bad.

Another thing that sticks out is that up until he enters the desert the MC only feels a bit weird, and then turns out he's downright crazy because of the time he spent dead... for wich you hadn't had even an hint until then. I mean, he did seem a bit weird, and that I mostly attributed to him having been a neet or just his quirks, but nothing on the level of insanity he showed later.

That said, the part where he became insane is also the part I liked the most, made me really laugh at times, wich is why I kept reading since I usually don't like MC that are too OP.

The starting objective of making his sister happy with the prince seems to have been completely derailed.

TriageXX
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This is a dark comedy if any. The main character is a hilarious, Playboy pervert that has all the aspects of an OP MC, at least to the Nobel families he torments. LOL. He’s a demon king to some but an angel to others. His hole family is a mess of interesting characters and I love them all. Great character denamics and BRO humor. I recommend this read to all! Give it the chance it so desperately deserves! 

Dear Author,

LOVE YOUR BOOK!! NEVER STOP! AND I WILL FOREVER SUPPORT U! 

P.S. if you ever need more than spiritual support I recommend uploading your novel to PATRON. Please make sure to never quit writing.

DarkEden
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good easy to read story

if you have spare time and want to read something funny read this

manhw
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I've read halfway into the story, and this story is a cringe induced mess. 90% of the writing is about our MC monologuing about his sexual preferences and idiotic memes, there is very little actual dialogue.

Characters aren't developed, MC and his actions are very annoying. This is basically a very badly-written wish fulfillment fantasy. You can read 2 sentences in the entire chapter and miss nothing of importance. I know that royalroad doesn't always have the best writing, but this story is probably rock bottom in terms of quality.