Whisper Of The Void

by Moxxi

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Dungeon High Fantasy LitRPG Magic
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

There once existed a very strong magician who had somehow infused two opposite elements together and created a new type of magic, this magic was so powerful that no one could stand up against it. But the power was so great that in the midst of a battle, the magician charged up more magic that he couldn’t control. As a result, the whole world got consumed by his spell, leaving only a sphere of void behind. About 3000 years later, the void opens, releasing evil upon the world. Amidst the chaos, there awakens a man who possesses strange magic, and he makes his own party of powerful people, with the goal of defeating the void and reclaiming peace within the kingdoms.

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This novel is a work in progress, and chapters will be edited. If you find any grammar mistakes etc, please PM me so I can fix it, thank you. Also, if there's anything you'd like to send as feedback, please PM me that as well.

I have a fandomwiki for this novel, were you can find extra information about characters and other things. The wiki does include backdoor information though, so if you don't want spoilers, I don't recommend you entering it. The fandomwiki also has illustrations of both characters and weapons. (Link Here)

I release a new chapter every Sunday at 11:00(CEST)

I can give a quick disclaimer that chapter 1-7 is going to be completely rewritten once I've finished chapter 25. The chapters will include the same content, but just written better. When I first started writing, I was a completely newbie with no experience what's so ever. I've like never read a book seriously either, so that's why dialogs and everything is really formatted weird. But when I finish chapter 25, which is the end of Volume 1, I'll go through each and every one of my chapters, and reinforce them, so they look much better. I do this because I don't like the way I've done it, plus it's just not the way it's supposed to be. When I finish that, I'll move on and start working on Volume 2 of this novel. I have a layout for four volumes at the moment, but I only think I'll write two volumes. If I get a lot of feedback and positive comments, I might start working on another volume. Each volume is 25 chapters by the way, and each chapter is around 3500 words, or 13 pages.

I do have a lot of both school and work, but I try my best to finish a chapter per week. If I end up getting to much IRL work, I might make it one chapter every two weeks, but we'll see.

NOTE:

I release updates on my process of the novel on my reddit page! Make sure to join the reddit at r/WhisperOfTheVoid

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Story: 4

The story in this novel is really interesting! To put it simple, you follow a man which have lost his memories, and this man has a strong connection to “the void” which is basically the main conflict in the novel. I love how everything works, from the magic system to the leveling system. I would’ve given a 5/5 on the story if it weren’t for the first chapters. The first half of the novel was pretty rushed, ngl. Everything went too fast, and critical information were missing from both characters and places.

 

Character: 4

I LOVE the mystery behind all the characters. You don’t get to know much about people’s past or their background in general, but the author leaves hints to make us able to speculate about the characters. Both Sukehiro’s past, Astral’s past and Blackbeard’s past are all things which I really want to know! I’m looking forward to getting to know these characters more in the future!

The reason why I gave a 4/5 is because yet again, characters in the first chapters were barely introduced, and you only got to know their name.

 

Grammar: 4

The grammar is pretty okay, there is however some mistakes a little bit here and there. For example, words which sounds the same, but are spelled differently and mean different things. This can sometimes confuse me, but I’m often able to understand what the author means.

 

Style: 4

I guess the overall writing style is okay. I do however absolutely hate the way the author makes his dialogs. It’s confusing and you don’t know whether a person talks or thinks. The author also uses the “-” instead of the “–” which makes it even worse. But these are all minor details, so I’ll leave the score on a ⅘

 

Overall score: 4

To be completely honest, I think this novel is underrated. Sure, the first chapters are pretty bad, but it keeps getting more and more interesting as you proceed in the novel. I liked this novel enough to even recommend it to one of my friends which loves fantasy novels. He didn’t think it was as good as I said it was, but he still enjoyed it. This novel is also the reason why I made an account on this website, just so I could make this review (just because no one else had done one yet)

 

If you like fantasy, action and adventure novels, then I think you should give this novel a try, and please, believe me when I say this, please read the whole novel before you start to judge it. People say “don’t judge a book by its cover,” I say “don’t judge a book by its first chapters.”