Wake of the Ravager

by Macronomicon

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi GameLit High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

On the world of Marconen, your first Break determines the trajectory of your life. Calvin chose magic. Without proper schooling or a mentor, the boy is dragged by the whims of fate across the face of the planet, blending together different schools of magic and powerful abilities to create something new.

But there's a deeper secret behind his success. Why was he born an exile from his country? Why is his System so strange, and why does it keep talking to him?

And as the march of time continues, something evil grows in power across the ocean.

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DrMonotone
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Probably update this later with a more indepth review but the first few chapters are very promising. Love Macro's other novel so I had no doubt this one would also be a gem, but suprisingly it was better than expected. Although we have only brushed the surface of this new system, unique with unlimitied potential, I think its gonna last a long time! Though it really gives me warhammer vibes for some reason...  Skaven for life XD

CAL111
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Excellent story, looking forward to reading this one. The character is well developed and the story has huge potential. The grammar is good and writing a new kind of system for a Litrpg of is what really puts this ahead over most Litrpg. As long as the quality and updates stays consistent it could definitely get more traction. Overall one of the best Litrpg on royal road as of chapter 12. 

13lack12ose
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Another banger from Mr M

great story but some random Canadian dude. 
Just kidding, Mr M has created another fabulous world with a spell system I haven't seen before. 

Definitely give this one a go people!

Deepak Kamlesh
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Excellent! Love it. Often I complain that there are no original stories anymore but this feels novel and has a lot of potential. The characters are fleshed out really well. The protagonist in particular is mischievous but has good sense and is hilarious. There is a lot of subversion that keeps you continually hooked. I have just binged up to the latest available chapter, which is 22 and the bombshells have me intrigued about where the story is gonna go! A must read in my opinion. 

Chilling_Monk
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Great Stuff, craving more

Pure enjoyment up till now.

I love the different skill sets and paths they can go 

really refreshing compared to simple manafireballbooom spells. 

 

 

Characters in in this novel rely on a resource called “Bent” for “skill”-executions. Different to other novels this resource is very limited in its quantity and regeneration compared to most other litrpgs. 

 

In the same character a persons skill reservoir is also severely limited and only grows slowly and through time and exposure to war. 

 

What has really shined for me to this point is Macros ability to flexible steer the story often with help/directions/votes by his Patreon and deliver a high quality story even through a lot of influence by Patreons. A system I would have never thought sustainable long term but which has surprised me up until now. His ability to stay so flexible and creative and deliver well written scenes in such short times from votes to release are testament to the creativity and skill of this author. 

 

 

 

 

narc_mouse
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A terrific read. An interesting plot, great character design, and no typos. This could absolutely be published, which means it stands head and shoulders above most of the stories in this site. 

Ulvlar
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like the story but,

As I said the story is great, but it is a bit uh like an 13 year old was writing it at times example: 

When Cal’s eyes finally adjusted, he blinked a couple times to make sure what he was seeing was real.

Ella was rather large, perhaps six feet tall, and wide, unlike her father. Whatever trait he’d inherited from his father that made him tall and skinny had decided to preform double duty.

She wasn’t fat. Her waist drew in to a smooth, toned stomach, but her hips flared back out, leading into strong grey-purple thighs. Her chest was…also large. Her breasts strained the leather top she wore.

She had a round face with delicate black brows and plump dark lips. Even tightened in concentration, they looked soft and inviting.

NeonDust
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This Book Cracked me up more than anything else in the recent years.Absolutely love the protagonist and his humour.The characters have a lot of colour to them and the pacing of the story is pretty good as well!Absolutely Loved It!!

MooshieD
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Lucky week finding two new stories with 20+ chapters already and awesome quality.   Great worldbuilding and characters, fun action, good smarts and funny laughs:). Oh and of course system (or sorts).  10/10!

wdc543
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Woohoo!!! Magic!!!

I read up to chapter 2 as of this review and it has 2🐈🐱🐈👑👑👑 magics I've never heard of.

That and the author is known for finishing his stories once he starts writing them means it's a really great read!!!