Wake of the Ravager

by Macronomicon

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi GameLit Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead
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On the world of Marconen, your first Break determines the trajectory of your life. Calvin chose magic. Without proper schooling or a mentor, the boy is dragged by the whims of fate across the face of the planet, blending together different schools of magic and powerful abilities to create something new.

But there's a deeper secret behind his success. Why was he born an exile from his country? Why is his System so strange, and why does it keep talking to him?

And as the march of time continues, something evil grows in power across the ocean.

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thejoker195
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Started out good, fell to mediocre.

 This started out quite good, first chapter actually made me laugh a bit but I guess it's never good to judge a book by its first few chapters because this spiralled down the toilet so fast I suddenly remembered why I never make it past any if the authors first 20 or so chapters.  

Calvin started out as a likable character, a little weird but in a good way imo, knew what he wanted and actually tried taking steps to get there but as the story progressed I just can't fingale what made me start to dislike the character, maybe it was the constant need for the author to make him everyone's plaything or excuse my French 'little bitch' or the fact that one moment his gritting his teeth in anger and swearing vengeance on the cannibals that devoured his friends and plan to make small chops out of him then the next second his thinking about humping the "somehow' bootylicious cannibal chiefs daughter, how terribly convenient and extremely foolish, but since the author decided that after writing or thinking up the sexy babarian chick and that he wanted a harem but couldn't see anyway to erase the fact that said vixen and her people just wiped out his village and are having his friends for dinner, he decides that a love potion is the way to go. 

 It just feels like the author has no plan and is jumping from idea to idea while trying to force it all to fit. I will say that I did enjoy the magic system, seemed fresh and really makes for some cool synergy.

I was originally going to pull another star for the bait and switch because I thought the author was writing a harem but didn't want to tag it as so for whatever reason but I can see the tags have been updated which further proves that he doesn't really know where this story is going but is following his lower head and whatever his patreon supporters suggest. 

All said it a mediocre tale and hopefully I'll forget about it again soon. Have a nice day. 

themell
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The story is ok. It was better before the story went towards the harem route. Feels like the harem route is being forced and the women are acting unrealistic, and everything is turning into a big wankfest. If you like harems, then you'll like this story.

metaperture
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Interesting Magic System, Lackluster Plot

By far the best part of this story is the magic system. Very unique, although the MC does become OP relative to most people due to absurd luck, it isn't OP to the level of eliminating conflict, which seems to scale with his power growth. Some aspects of the system are used and combined in interesting ways, leading to some rather satisfying magical problem solving.

Unfortunately, the story itself leaves a lot to be desired. The events seem to be strung together to give an excuse to give the MC XP or yet-another-love interest, rather than because there's any overarching plot. The characters are generally shallow and unrealistic--played for a light, comic effect, which makes for an easy read that ultimately feels unsatisfying.

Osborn
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This story could have been much better... If the mc wasn't such a st*pid retard...

Don't expect an intelligent mc, you will not find that here. Don't expect logical choices when choosing the mc's abilities, cause a new born baby can do a much better job than the mc. Also don't expect the mc to be in control of his own life, because he is so useless that he is thrown away from one wrong situation to another without being able to do anything about it.

That is to say, the mc is such an annoying character that it completely ruins the story for me. The author going out of his way to make things difficult for the mc doesn't help either. I read up to chapter 13 and found it impossible to continue reading. Can not suggest this story to others.

DrMonotone
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Probably update this later with a more indepth review but the first few chapters are very promising. Love Macro's other novel so I had no doubt this one would also be a gem, but suprisingly it was better than expected. Although we have only brushed the surface of this new system, unique with unlimitied potential, I think its gonna last a long time! Though it really gives me warhammer vibes for some reason...  Skaven for life!!!

Coming back a few weeks.... I think later, still loving where this story is going, though I feel like some of those fat ass haters might have found the novel. Just shows you how good this novel is if its attracting this many shit flies, WOTR is straight honey! XD

13lack12ose
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Another banger from Mr M

great story but some random Canadian dude. 
Just kidding, Mr M has created another fabulous world with a spell system I haven't seen before. 

Definitely give this one a go people!

 

edit as of chapter 22:

Story is really coming into its own now with the MC having encountered several *obstacles* on the way. Really can't stress enough how good this one is folks.

READ NOW

Ulvlar
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like the story but,

As I said the story is great, but it is a bit uh like an 13 year old was writing it at times example: 

When Cal’s eyes finally adjusted, he blinked a couple times to make sure what he was seeing was real.

Ella was rather large, perhaps six feet tall, and wide, unlike her father. Whatever trait he’d inherited from his father that made him tall and skinny had decided to preform double duty.

She wasn’t fat. Her waist drew in to a smooth, toned stomach, but her hips flared back out, leading into strong grey-purple thighs. Her chest was…also large. Her breasts strained the leather top she wore.

She had a round face with delicate black brows and plump dark lips. Even tightened in concentration, they looked soft and inviting.

CAL111
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Excellent story, looking forward to reading this one. The character is well developed and the story has huge potential. The grammar is good and writing a new kind of system for a Litrpg of is what really puts this ahead over most Litrpg. As long as the quality and updates stays consistent it could definitely get more traction. Overall one of the best Litrpg on royal road as of chapter 12. 

narc_mouse
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A terrific read. An interesting plot, great character design, and no typos. This could absolutely be published, which means it stands head and shoulders above most of the stories in this site. 

fanobody
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Spoiler: System mechanic

 The mc have plot armor, mage build that figth short range and win(proof that body is useless). He is a jack of all trade but not realy, take physical skill, don't train mind skill, don't train sub attribute for mind. Have many skills that don't synergise but still kill adult noproblemo.

This is another problem, other are stupid to make the mc intelligent.

Even with this this is an enjoyable story, but where is it going? Apart from one cheat he has(that come from nowhere) nothing distinguish the mc from another.