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The universe is destroyed and its inhabitants are thrown into Existence. Eli finds himself in a new world, with a new body, and a System that's more interested in how he'll die. Follow him on his journey of survival in Realms above ours.
The story is already completely planned as far as major plot elements go, and it's LONG, chinese novel long. The premise isnt exactly the most original, but after a couple chapters you won't mistake it for any other novel. Be warned this has little in the way of childish wish fufillment and lots of characters are going to die, so don't get too attached.
As this is my first attempt at writing, the begining will probably be a bit rough. Please don't shy from criticisms, and I plan to rewrite most of the begining chapters as I get better.
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There is not much to review yet, but the author seems to be committed to doing a good job.
So far it seems to be a litRPG with world-assimilation aspects and system abusing thematics.
The writing is great and the grammar spotless. Give it a shot a let's see how the plot progresses.
So far, from what i've seen this has a ton of potential. Tkalius' writing style is highly descriptive keeping you completely informed of the situation in ways that I have rarely seen and its rather impressive. This flows perfectly into his currently outlined story which is relatively action packed at the moment. The MC doesn't suddenly break down and spend several arks evaluating his life choices and the moral delema of everything that exists, he buckles down and gets ready for the ride of his life. He sure as hell isn't happy about his circumstances, but he goes one step further.
Survival may be recommended, but for Eli, Survival is a must.
I really enjoyed reading this story so far, especially the LitRPG elements, as it seems levels truly need to be worked for, a nice change from some! An intriguing path for the Main Character so far, but a semi-rewrite seems to be in progress, so I'll hold off from an advanced review for the time being. Highly recommend!