Dimensional Paradise

by Jke

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Horror Sci-fi Harem Male Lead Post Apocalyptic Strong Lead Super Heroes Urban Fantasy
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Awakening in a strange place, Aleen is forced to fight for his life in a strange game filled with beasts, monsters, and bloodthirsty killers. But while he tries to survive that nightmare, things more important than his life are at stake; and the safety of his loved ones will depend on how much power he can obtain.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue I ago
Prologue II ago
Chapter 1 – Death Game (1) ago
Chapter 2 – Death Game (2) ago
Chapter 3 – Death Game (3) ago
Chapter 4 – Death Game (4) ago
Chapter 5 – Death Game (5) ago
Chapter 6 – Lightning Strikes (1) ago
Chapter 7 – Lightning Strikes (2) ago
Chapter 8 – Lightning Strikes (3) ago
Chapter 9 – Lightning Strikes (4) ago
Chapter 10 – Lightning Strikes (5) ago
Chapter 11 – Flag Finale (1) ago
Chapter 12 – Flag Finale (2) ago
Chapter 13 – Flag Finale (3) ago
Chapter 14 – Flag Finale (4) ago
Chapter 15 – Gamemaster (1) ago
Chapter 16 – Gamemaster (2) ago
Chapter 17 – Questions and Answers ago
Chapter 18 – Interlude: The hatred of a puppet princess ago
Chapter 19 – Interlude: The invasion of Lars island ago
Chapter 20 – Back to Home (1) ago
Chapter 21 – Back to Home (2) ago
Chapter 22 – Back to Home (3) ago
Chapter 23 – Back to Home (4) ago
Chapter 24 – Back to Home (5) ago
Chapter 25 – Raid (1) ago
Chapter 26 – Raid (2) ago
Chapter 27 – Raid (3) ago
Chapter 28 – Raid (4) ago
Chapter 29 – Raid (5) ago
Chapter 30 – Game or Hell (1) ago
Chapter 31 – Game or Hell (2) ago
Chapter 32 – Game or Hell (3) ago
Chapter 33 – Game or Hell (4) ago
Chapter 34 – Game or Hell (5) ago
Chapter 35 – Game or Hell (6) ago
Chapter 36 – A Step From Death ago
Chapter 37 – Before the Boss Raid (1) ago
Chapter 38 – Before the Boss Raid (2) ago
Chapter 39 – Queen Brooder (1) ago
Chapter 40 – Queen Brooder (2) ago
Chapter 41 – Queen Brooder (3) ago
Chapter 42 – Queen Brooder (4) ago
Chapter 43 – Inside the Nest (1) ago
Chapter 44 – Inside the Nest (2) ago
Chapter 45 – Inside the Nest (3) ago
Chapter 46 – Deadly Queen (1) ago
Chapter 47 – Deadly Queen (2) ago
Chapter 48 – Inside the Nest (4) ago
Chapter 49 – Between Hope and Despair (1) ago
Chapter 50 – Between Hope and Despair (2) ago
Chapter 51 – Between Hope and Despair (3) ago
Chapter 52 – Between Hope and Despair (4) ago
Chapter 53 – Between Hope and Despair (5) ago
Chapter 54 – Between Hope and Despair (6) ago
Chapter 55 – Between Hope and Despair (7) ago
Chapter 56 – The Raid Ends ago
Chapter 57 – Information ago
Chapter 58 – Interlude: Meeting with a Level Six ago
Chapter 59 – Interlude: The Dream of a Trapped Bird ago
Chapter 60 – Interlude: The Birth of a Hero ago
Chapter 61 – Interlude: The Girl and Her Cat ago
Chapter 62 – Interlude: Eternal Flame (1) ago
Chapter 63 – Interlude: Eternal Flame (2) ago
Chapter 64 – Unexpected Visitors (1) ago
Chapter 65 – Unexpected Visitors (2) ago
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xmenxuser
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Not bad so far but is it Aleen or

Aiden? You keep switching the names

SevenShade
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Style is just 2 star cause the setting is like ARENA , TERROR INFINITY and ect...

 

Story score is so-so ... cause of a simple logical reasoning like whats the most dangerous bout team fight? Ofcourse its being a scout ! And the MC got a ride with a woman experiencing some nonesense like being ignore while the MChisterically warn her of a beast ! Then later advising him of rules like being alert?! Are u nuts woman?! No ! Because of author a plot like that happen ! 

 

GRAMMAR is only 3 star because the authro lacks punctuation ! Like comma...u will see it when u read it .. go ...

 

If its the authors first time them im his/her 1st blood !!!  Not bad trying BUT pls ! Review your work and plan ahead the plot before and after  writing !!!