Original ONGOING Contemporary Psychological Grimdark Male Lead Slice of Life Strong Lead Villainous Lead Virtual Reality
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Arnold was a strange child. Not the normal strange, he was too odd even for that. Something was wrong with him. No one knew what it was. He didn't hide it, and yet no one really noticed, either. Not right away, anyway. By then it was too late.
Arnold had become Morbid.
(Please Note: cover image is a mockup and altered from a free image found on the net)
I hope to publish weeklyevery three days, daily, time permitting.

 

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Bokuboy

Bokuboy

Creator of L.I.F.E. Begins

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
01 Long Ago ago
02 Not Long Ago ago
03 Recently ago
04 Now ago
05 Intro To Computers ago
06 He's Got A Girlfriend ago
07 School Worries ago
08 Family Time ago
09 More Worries ago
10 Going Out ago
11 Meet My Mom ago
12 Grief Has A Price ago
13 Proper Procedure ago
14 A Meeting of the Minds ago
15 Heather Works Hard ago
16 Arnold Works Hard ago
17 Learning Curve ago
18 Testing ago
19 That Happened ago
20 Listen to Claire ago
21 Another Job ago
22 Aftermath ago
23 Clarify That ago
24 Intro to VR ago
25 Finishing Up ago
26 Pool Fun ago
27 Girlfriend Duty ago
28 Morning Struggles ago
29 Visitors ago
30 Decisions ago
31 Free And Clear ago
32 Chance Encounter ago
33 Media Blitz ago
34 The Break-Up (Sponsored) ago
35 Back At School ago
36 Confrontations (Sponsored) ago
37 Fallout ago
38 Stressed A Little ago
39 Dinner Plans And VR ago
40 Dinner And A Show ago
41 School Daze ago
42 College Expectations ago
43 Studying And VR ago
44 Talking It Out ago
45 Studying ago
46 Exams and Kelly ago
47 Acquisitions ago
48 Working Things Out ago
49 Unleash The Beast Part One ago
50 Unleash The Beast Part Two ago
51 Airing Things Out ago
52 Graduation ago
53 Prom ago
54 After Party ago
55 Intro To College ago
56 Meet The Department ago
57 College Life ago
Not A Chapter: 3 Day Hiatus ago
58 College Life Part Two ago
59 Micro-Chapter 1 ago
60 Micro-Chapter 2 ago
61 Micro-Chapter 3 ago
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124 Micro-Chapter 66 ago
125 Anxiousness ago
126 Recovery ago
127 Taking Care Of Arnold ago
128 Dorm Mother ago
129 Knowledge ago
130 This Is Okay? ago
131 It Spreads A Little ago
132 Groceries ago
133 Back Home ago
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Soldieratarms
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Better than his previous works

I've read much of his other works and I can honestly say that this is much better written. It does follow the same style as his previous works but both the interactions between the characters and the general maturity of them. Many of the charicters in his other books suffered from a lack of maturity, but comparing them you can see the growth of the writer. The only major down side I can see is the fact that for a vr story the Mc hasn't actually entered the primary game in about 50 odd chapters in, but other than that it's a solid work.

NastySquire
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As of Chapter 10: If you don't mind and OP MC then go ahead (I like OP MC's). Fantasy, Gamelit, and VR tags are only in the story briefly so don't come in expecting much of those tags. 

It's definitely and interesting read.

Update as of Chapter 39: Looks like VR might come into play a little bit more. Not like stories that are focused soley on VR (super advanced future nonsense). More like how people use it now in the real world.

ZekromZZ
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most of these reviews are pretty wrong.

the amount of reviews from people who haven't trusted the author to make some sense out of the whole "smut" portion is amazing. First of all if you guys have ever read a diffrent one of his story's (MOA) you would know that the author likes his every chapter sex scenes.... but this book isn't that. Just like the author promised the whole "smut arc" feels very natural for the situation. We have a minipulative mom/daughter pair that basically used Arnold and eventually what they never told him was "bad" for there own pleasure came to bite them in the ass. It was explained multiple times that information changes Arnold's behavior that makes it not too far reaching to say that arnold could have been isolated from things like the internet to protect him, imagine if anytime you saw a picture you gained one more expectation of what would happen in a situation... and you have an infinite number of pictures. I really think that people who may have dropped this should pick it up again just to give it a chance  As a lot has changed in recent chapters.

Maukka
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Very sexy and good.

This is awesome but the 1st few chapters are just setup to get things started and don't really reflect what the rest of the story is going to be like(at least as of chapter 46).

There's lots of interesting lewdity and thankfully it's more focused on making the story of how and why the lewd things happen engaging instead of boring you with endless minutiae about the act itself like some other novels do.

All characters are interesting and detailed with their own motivations while the story has some really awesome moments and surprises.

You'll love this if idea of an inexperienced man, straightforward and obedient to a fault, being taught about how to do romance and have sex by various women is at all appealing to you.

yongomongo
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Le Attempt At A Critique~

Read seriously, it's an edgy story that indubitably raises the question of autobiographical inferiority complex overpowering, but read as a persiflage of the romance genre in its entirety, and especially the recurring variants on this very site, it's a brilliantly dazzling masterpiece of comedy. 
The distinct style and dry humor are also quite endearing. 

Well. So much for my pretense of sophistication. I fucking love your style, Bokuboy, and while I think the conciseness of the plot detoriated the last few chapters, just your writing alone makes your material far better than the average story on here, as far as I'm concerned.

Keep at it! Please. Do it. Write. 
Seeing some of the comments, apparently the story -- how I read it anyhow -- went right over their head, so don't let yourself be discouraged by that! 
Keep. Writing. 

;D

Stephen Lewis
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Ch43

I enjoyed reading this much more then I thought I would

I enjoyed the authors style 

I remember few if any errors spelling or otherwise 

I'm interested in where this goes the only thing I'm not sure how I feel about is the mc obviously he is on the spectrum plus a little bit of a sociopath but all in all it wasn't terrible 

 

Tldr it is worth a try 

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kinda of done with the micro-chapter bs I understand that he is doing it to combat censorship  but it's still annoying 

Anyways I'm still enjoying everything for the most part

Shuu
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My Morbid obsession . “DEXTER” like. Amazing writing. Great binge read.

If you liked the show “DEXTER” you will love this novel. Fantastic writing with good paceing. It has so many directions it can go while still keeping you hooked. I love the narration changes that are just the right amount of length to get you the other people’s perspective while still focusing on my main man. Good timing on edits. I will definitly be refreshing everyday hopeing for a new post. 

noneed4me2
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Expectations pleasantly subverted

didnt see this going the direction it did. Honestly thought it was going to be more of a Dexter type story but liked where it went. Sorta a slice of life drama of a mildly autistic person. Can’t wait for more chapters pounded the current releases in an evening. The erotic stuff is well done too.

zigman2021
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Author has an oddly specific genre preference

I don't know why it's so specific, but the author likes their main protagonist to be a young man/boy that is helpless or totally incompetent in some important ways, but a god among men in others. Also Harems and implied that everyone is putty around him, regardless of logic or common sense.

In master of none it was a physical handicap, while being amazing at VR and completely irresistible to women and a sex god. In Morbid, it seems to be an emotional or psychological impairment, while being amazing at VR (I assume, I couldn't make it that far) and being completely irresistible to women and a sex god. Seeing a pattern?

If you love their other fiction, Master of All, you'll love Morbid. Otherwise, feel free to avoid this. 

Snek
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Very unique in a good way

I really like the way you portray Arnold and his interactions with other people, he is very unique and that is refreshing. 
I can't wait to see where the plot takes him.