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Arnold was a strange child. Not the normal strange, he was too odd even for that. Something was wrong with him. No one knew what it was. He didn't hide it, and yet no one really noticed, either. Not right away, anyway. By then it was too late.
Arnold had become Morbid.
(Please Note: cover image is a mockup and altered from a free image found on the net)
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zigman2021
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Author has an oddly specific genre preference

I don't know why it's so specific, but the author likes their main protagonist to be a young man/boy that is helpless or totally incompetent in some important ways, but a god among men in others. Also Harems and implied that everyone is putty around him, regardless of logic or common sense.

In master of none it was a physical handicap, while being amazing at VR and completely irresistible to women and a sex god. In Morbid, it seems to be an emotional or psychological impairment, while being amazing at VR (I assume, I couldn't make it that far) and being completely irresistible to women and a sex god. Seeing a pattern?

If you love their other fiction, Master of All, you'll love Morbid. Otherwise, feel free to avoid this. 

Jacob Wickey
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I don’t normally write reviews, but this one definitely deserves one because it is so well written and easy to read.

A lot of web novels on royal road are somewhat predictable and follow similar treads but Morbid is a first for me atleast style wise. The main character, Arnold is both relatable (to me) and enjoyable to read about. He gets into both cringy and awe inspiring situations that leave me reeling from the insanity of it all. 

I very much look forward to future chapters and hope to see more of his abilities in cutting up dead animals and foiling any and all revenge for plots.

Side note: this story is more sexual then the description and first few chapters would lead you to believe. Not a bad thing in my opinion but still a good thing to know going into this web novel.

Cloud fist
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i don’t usually read this kind of horror/psychological books but this one got me hooked. Now let’s just hope he don’t kill everyone.

Timez
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I enjoyed the beggining!!

It's good, even though I am only 5 Chapters in. The pace is perfect the feeling is great and hopefully, it stays this way. The story is perfectly balanced in its beginning stages nothing is too much or too little. I hope it only grows better from here. 

tarakis
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I am Not skeered ( O.K. Yes I am)

Arnold terrifies me, I want a Friend like him to Always have my back, of course I would have Lots of money, a fake passport, and an appointment with a plastic surgeon if I got the indication that I upset/pissed him off in anyway. Bokuboy has done it Yet Again with masterful writting. The style, grammar are awesome and if he make a mistake he corrects it asap and thanks the person pointing it out. The characters in this story a awesome, They are real to me even though it is fiction. Bokuboy is one of the most awesome writers I have had the pleasure of reading.

:D CHEERS (c)

Greekreader
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This is smut pure and simple, sure it's got some funny moments and the very beginning seemed like it had something to do with "Morbid" and sure the author throws in some parts hinting at a future VR gaming thing but the whole thing is smut I've read all the way up to the lab assistant being added in which was chapter 34ish? (Idk when he kissed her I was just done) It's not bad sure and if you're horny you may enjoy it but really unless he (MC) goes and murders everyone and just starts a gaming career with some murder "mystery" elements (which may happen heck that seems like the way it's going to go but what do I know) it'll just stay smut with some gaming elements and possibly a murder or two with some over the top VR PK (probably) again not really bad the grammar is pretty good it paints a good picture, dialogue is okay kinda rough, and asides from the MC there isn't much depth to characters or any real reason for their actions they are just there for the authors use rather than actual people if you catch my meaning. Heck even the MC is just a straight up robot for most of it sometimes during the beginning and a little every now and then he isn't, but he has a legitimate "backstory" for that, the others don't.

That's it really, if you're horny and a male go for it if you're a woman you may get a kick out of it at some parts but idk (I'm a guy what do I know) I would just recommend staying away if you're a woman unless you just wanna skip all the sex stuff which is the ENTIRE story.

Now this is to the author: you write very well as I said earlier you create good pictures with your words can't complain grammar wise or spelling wise. If this was advertised as more or less the "sexual misadventures of a future psycho murdering VR pro player" instead of "psycho kid who's different and they should have stopped him when he was younger"  it may fit better or maybe writing them separately and saying this is his early days and saying in the summary as such would probably roll over better just so people would know what to expect because heck it's some pretty good erotica at times. If you made something else that was more story focused I would........OMG I just realized you wrote mythrans ahhhh I see now so this is you having fun here I get it welp take whatever you want out of what I've said.....oh wait I just looked at the other works you do (Ullir) and it seems you're playing alot of your personal fantasies into these stories and I mean that's fine but please please please just let people know up front that sex is a MAJOR (the red warning DOESN'T COUNT people put that on EVERYTHING on RR) part of the story it's fine not to for your regulars but the people who are new to your work are going to feel lied too and led on hoping for what they had in the beginning if they came for a mostly story focused story rather than a quick jaunt of story then SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX action SEX SEX SEX does that make sense? I hope so, and I hope this doesn't hit a nerve as I said before take what you want out of this review and just enjoy doing what you do!

Hyeon
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Iam positively surprised!

Iam really glad to have started reading this, the characters have depths, the story as far as i can tell will be huge, the author here is really setting up something big. You might expect to have your generic vr story, but that is not the case, the real world is felshed out and seems to have a big impact aswell. The author has written other long stories aswell so i dont think there is any reason to fear that (s)he will abonden this one. Im looking forward for more :)

camperbee
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Just WTF alot of R-rated content thats that out there

 

If you can take or enjoy a lot of those sexual scenes..go for it

Its a really interesting story

Still no idea where this is going but our mc day to day is already interesting enough for me

Thx author

Fun guy btw this author dude

Ambrose ufo
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1 This story is some serious clickbait false advertising

2 All the female characters take advantage of this seemingly autistic kid for sex.Thats pretty messed up

3 All the female characters are extremely manipulative for NO REASON

4 You Should tell people this story is a harem

5 There's more smut than vr content

6 I don't get the point in lying about your story, it sucks that you get your kicks from it

7 the beginning is good. 

Adam Carheden
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Not sure why I like this one

I keot reading this one for a while, but finally gave up on it. I really do want to know what happens to Arnold. But it stopped being about Arnold and his uniqueness and degraded into an silly sexual fantasy.

The characters bother me. They're not very believable. Arnold is a bit off by design, but how does he go his whole life unemotional and uninterested except  in dead things and then suddenly go all protective with his mother and a girl he just met? Heather and her mom are also sex-obsessed and caniving male fantasies rather than realistic female characters.