Demon vs. Angel

by concretepencil

Original HIATUS Comedy Fantasy Romance Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Supernatural

Astro, a demon who has reinvented himself as a local business owner, runs a tavern in the small town of Braedon. Astro's life is disturbed when a bunny-child wanders into his tavern along with his strong-willed and beautiful guardian angel.

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I Am Taking Off (II)
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Redghost70
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It's a very cute story. There are a few spelling mistakes and grammer mistakes. However, it doesn't take away from the overall story! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see if the demon gets his girl.