My Dungeon Life: Rise of the Slave Harem

by whatsawhizzer

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Dungeon Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Slice of Life
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I'm poor. I'm fat. The girl I like just turned me down and I even got beat up for it. I just wanted to go home and play some video games. Now, My life is a video game called Dungeon Life, and I'm expected to risk it every day for rewards. Well, too bad I picked a supporting class and am too socially awkward to get by in a party. Wait... this world has slavery? I can have beautiful women fight for me, and then warm my bed every night? Perhaps this world isn't so bad after all.

If you've read Slave Harem in the Labyrinth of Another World, this is my take on the slice-of-life genre. It's about navigating dungeons, fighting monsters, and enjoying the finer things in life with wealth gained. Yes, the chapters are short.

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hakatri gin
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Exactly what it promises

Reviewed at: Chapter 217

The title says SLAVE HAREM so dont pretend you came here looking for the next existential masterpiece 

Its a story about a guy assembling his battle harem and then delving into dungeons, just as the synopsis says, so i cannot fathom why there is people coming to shit on it for delivering what it promises

Well, actually i know why, because they are snobs

That aside lets talk about what makes this a good HAREM story:

First of all there is sex but its not very intrusive, the most described scenes happen after a new girl joins, and from there on the scenes are just sprinkled here and there without taking that much space, and its presented as an act of bonding rather than of mere pleasure, so the MC doesnt come off as a lecherous creep nor the girls as glorified sexbots

For the story there is this gimmick where the dungeons are created by curses placed by someone's unfinished business and some magical condensation, therefore the dungeons can be cleared by destroying them or by completing/satisfying the lore that spawned them

This makes the act of delving not just a fight but also has a certain amount of detective work, or more precisely aventuring work, then we have the girls who have their own backstories

While the MC and the girls most of the time have simple backstories (althoug some are more complex and interesting) the ways they react to the dungeons lore gives them enough room to express personality, and they do feel like a team because they have to find a middle ground between themselves and the dungeon lore

Seriously, the dungeon lore mechanic its a pretty good narrative tool, because it gives personality to the dungeons, and if the environment has personality the characters will develop some themselves just by reacting, and it also makes the world feel bigger because they are interacting with the stories of other people

I can almost say that the dungeon lore mechanic carries the whole story, such a great narrative tool

There is also the fact that completing dungeons its hard and very risky but it also gives great rewards, meaning the MC has potential to be OP but it feels earned (besides the initial power pack) and there is a good sense of progression

The other element its the interaction with the regular people, villagers, local leaders, bandits and stuff, they are very sparse compared to the dungeon delving but have no real flaws on their implementation, so its more than enough since the core mechanic of dungeon delving its so complete

Ah, yes, there is a light plot armor but its weaved into the plot as the power of friendship/love/harem and its mostly a recognition of tropes; we know some stuff its going to hapen to solve the problem and its mostly a case of it requiring a plausible solution that its not an asspull, and it delivers

A generic reviewer would say "its not perfect but," and i instead say it never tries to be perfect, it tries to be entertaining and doesnt dwell on its flaws, its not trying to be a masterpiece, its not trying to be intellectual, its not trying to break the mold and usher a new age of the harem genre

Its an honest work that delivers on the promises, and that its more than enough to be entertaining

its a solid four if you are looking for anything to kill time, or a five if you are loking for a harem story, but im giving it an advanced five to balance all those snobbish reviews

branislavs369
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Are you on a toilet and have nothing better to do? If yes then this is the story for you!

Are you searching for a new story that will make you smile with every new chapter released? Sorry, i would not recommend this.

 

I am not a big fan of the standard review format so i will just wing this.

I started reading the story thinking this is the first story of a new author that will grow and get better as time progresses. I was wrong.

This author has his own website with a lot of stories and hundreds of released chapters. So if you happen to like this story i would recommend going there, its a nice website.

Upon reading the first few chapters i noticed grammar errors and they don't go away. I read up to chapter 50+ and the grammar stays the same. People who are bothered by things like this be warned.

 

*The author marked where one chapter ends and a new one begins so this next paragraph is outdated. Props for that. It makes the whole reading experience much nicer.

Sometimes in the middle of a chapter you might notice that the story seems to shift, as if there's a paragraph missing. Upon further investigation i noticed that its because the chapters we get here are the combination of  2 or 3 chapters on the authors website. No indication was made where one chapter ends and a new one begins, making the flow of the story really weird. It was most noticeable, at least for me, in chapter 2 where the guild receptionist out of nowhere suddenly knew the MC is a support class. I read the chapter 3 times and concluded its because she has an identify skill and was expecting it to be explained later on. I was wrong. It was just the beginning of a new website chapter and the MC probably told her hes a support class in-between the chapters.

The way the MC acts just rubs me the wrong way, hes just such a man child. Hes a walking stereotype to the point that his actions sometimes hurt my brain. As if that wasn't bad enough, fate itself seems to bend in the MCs favor too many times for me to just ignore it. Some coincidences that happen are just out of the world. But to the authors credit, the story is interesting enough that you don't really notice it as long as you don't question why some things are happening.

The sex scene that will happen later on was one of the most generic, boring ones i have ever read. There was no passion, no greater detail in moments where there was a need for it. It just felt dry and i would be much happier if the story just didn't have sex scenes if that is the way they are written.

After all those bad things i must say though, the game system of the world seems interesting. If nothing else i will check every chapter for level ups to see what new skills pop up and what they do.

louthank1
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So right out of the gate, I will admit that the Harem trope doesn't bother me all that much and as long as it is done in a way to add to the story in a believable way, I am not going to complain. Per the works of E.William Brown, I am familiar with the concept and have seen it work well. 

The Isekai segment of transporting to another world is honestly the only lazy part of the story thus far. No real effort appears to have been put into explaining how this came to be and seem to be mostly ignored. 

The Class/Job system is also frustratingly vague but due to the short amount of chapters available, it may just be material that has not been presented yet. I also find it odd that nobody in a room full of seasoned adventurers has ever heard of a support job much less the White Mage class. If this is meant to be a rare class, the gravity of his choice is left entirely to interpretation and for each of the readers to draw their own conclusion. 

Beyond that, the characters presented seem dynamic and only time will tell how things develop. I can see a shield hero/Raphatalia thing developing between the MC and The Tigress Swordsman (slave girl) but again we simply don't have enough chapters to truly make any real calls. 

So for right now, I will give 3 full stars that may as time goes on and more chapters are added I may increase or decrease depending on the writing.  

TomaO2
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Got What I Was Looking For

Reviewed at: Chapter 245

I am a fan of Slave Harem In Another World. It's a hard magical setting that has its powers capped but doesn't get into useless nitty gritty stuff like listing stat numbers. This story is heavily inspired by that work, it gets some things better, and some things worse, but the core is similar enough to give me what I wanted.

The MC starts out with a rare (but achievable) high tier job at the start, which gives him his main edge. Especially since he ends up in a place that allows his abilities to shine. He is also given the power to change his job (and others) at will, which allows him to use another strong job that he aquires. Job Change is the only unique power he gains from being summoned. That and he can see little stat boards pop up, which is mainly useful to read the name of a dungeon to get a clue as to how to solve the mystery.

Pretty quickly, he's thrown into a local dungeon, and is forced to fight his way though it. Dungeons are fairly unique. Each one is a curse from someone that died. Most people just destroy the dungeon, but there is also the option to complete the lore, in order to help the one that created the dungeon to find peace. This addition sets up the theme of the dungeon, and gives each one their own little mystery to solve. This makes things a lot more interesting than just grinding for xp, and is a welcome variation to the forumula. 

Upon solving it, you are given dungeon points. These give you access to special abilities. One of these is the reset button. This is a holdover ability from the insparation material, but it doesn't come much into play. The MC has needed extra items during a ghost dungeon, but they could have been discovered in other ways. I actually feel that it would have been more interesting to take away his job change ability, and having him aquire it after the dungeon finished, instead of the reset power. He is so close to being a normal man in this story, that I feel it should have just gone all the way. That would have made everything he's done completely atainable by anyone else, if they had done the same.

There is also a very good reason why people haven't done the same. Ressurections. Most stories don't like putting these in, and certainly not making it easy to do, regardless. All adventures can be ressurected, and even many commoners. Unlike most settings, it's not extremely difficult. Most towns have someone that can cast the spell, for a fee. You don't even need a body. The only exception to this is the dungeons, you die there, it is perminant. 

Slaves are, naturally, a big part of the story. Dispite the MC abhorring slavery, there are always curcumstances that force him to keep adding to his harem.

As of my writing, there are 4 slaves. Basically, he gains a new one with every dungeon he conquers. So far, they have been relatively interesting, and the first 3 all got numerous chapters to develop time with the MC. However, the latest girl got significantly less time. I worry about how far this trend might continue. If you keep adding new girls, then it will be hard to distinguish them from one another. Especially when it's just going from one dungeon to the next. 

The main focus of the story is dungeon crawling. There isn't a lot of time to really just study the world or live in it. His interactions with his girls primarily revolve around fighting together to beat the latest theat. I'm okay with this, mostly, the dungeons ARE interesting, with compelling stories behind them.

Unfortunately, he's also not really spending a lot of time exploring his abilities. While he has his moments, he's not an expecially clever character, which is personally dissapointing, because exploiting mechanics and figuring out how things work in a hard magic system are extremely interesting to me. 

There are some sex scenes. About one per dungeon, or book, as the case may be.  Most of them are locked behind a paywall, but the one with a fairy was not. I really wish it was. I tried reading it but I could not get past that he's having sex with a very, very, small fairy. I don't care how much she says her body can stretch. If that's your fetish though, then it might be up your ally. 

I liked some of the later reveals. Stuff I thought seemed odd turned out to work rather well in the world system, and there are a few genuine twist to expectations that surprised me. Other bits rubbed me the wrong way, as a lot of what happens can feel very forced by the narrative. One dungeon, he just decides to keep going down it, even though there is nothing stopping him from trying to leave instead. Another character is extremely greedy most of the time, but is wierdly generous on others, in order to make sure the MC gets what he needs for the next adventure. 

Overall, I enjoyed this a lot, and feel it's worth a solid 4. I was looking for a mechanics world with a hard magic system, and that is what this is. 

Sandsforever
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Early review: easy chill read

Ch12

So far it seems a little bland but not In a bad way

Not enough content yet to decide how I feel doesn't really get any negative demerits in my opinion (I hope the mc isn't going to be a pushover)

Chapters are a little short( but author says that in the synopsis)

I am interested in seeing how this develops

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The original was bad and the remake is worse...

Reviewed at: Chapter 27

So I read as far as the nsfw chapter... And yeah it was crap, like a transcript of a doujin a particularly bad one. 

Like many other stories around here it has a strong start before evening out before rapidly descending. This is usually around ch. 20-25, not long after they usually plummet. In this case the cringey protag. and the dialog and interaction between him and the love interest does it.

So yeah not really anything to see here, will probably be bumped out of trending soon.

Hapeiron
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Well lately I'm not attracted to the Harem genre. While I read things like: Slave Harem in the Labyrinth of Another World, the time came when I could not stand the development I had and I dropped it. For that reason I doubt that in fact it goes to follow this history faithfully.
But the suggestive cover and the fact that at the moment in which I write this review or critical only has two chapters in RoyalRoad, I was attracted enough to read what is published.
And so far it looks like the typical story of being transported in another world and the fulfillment of your dreams or fantasies.
The writing is understandable, although I can not give a true review of the theme.
For all that I wrote so far, this story, even though it is new, could earn a rating of 2.5 from my perspective. This qualification would increase if it had more chapters.
If the author maintains the quality of writing and achieve a pleasant development could even reach 3.5 or 4 stars. It only needs more chapters.

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 As a slight support to the author, I raise the rating that I give in RoyalToad up to 4.5 star.
This qualification is not completely reliable and does not have a reasonable justification.
But what I read about the story is understandable and even though it's not my favorite genre. I must say that as a man I am still attracted, even if it is somewhat questionable.
The true rating I should have is 4 stars at most, if I were consistent with the first part of my review. But I give him a .5 more for the low scores he already has and the future ones he will get from the trolls who do not even make a criticism.
For my part I will not say that I was never a troll. But even though I do not usually review or criticize the stories I read and I usually give an anonymous rating to the stories. The score I give is usually 3 stars or more. If I do not like the story, I just let it drop and it's really weird that it gives a Rating of 2.5 or less.
I don't usually give a review or criticism because:
1) I have nothing to add to those who already gave it, so usually I just give a thumbs up to the review that I like the most.
2) The fact that English is not my native language and sometimes my writing is unintelligible. 

Seadrake
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Hope for more chapters hosted here

What looks like a wish fulfillment novel destined to go busy is actually saved by the introduction of tough luck and Willey operators. 

Its awesome seeing him succeed when the odds really aren't in his favor and Whizzer has proven in past novels he isn't above giving the MC a low blow to bring him down. I look forward to the little guy growing into the harem guild master he is meant to be.

My only compliant would be a wish for more chapters to be hosted here and a wish for more chapters overall. But hey what can you do.

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this is a terrible story

Reviewed at: Chapter 1

look when I started this I thought that the title was not internally series like with boxy in everyone loves large chests. 

I was wrong this story is exactly as depraved as I thought and that is really annoying because I hoped for so much more.

it certainly divers this rating.

bruno237
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pretty good start, im hoping it goes on for a while.

maybe when MC clears the first dungeon he goes back to real world(temporary) and notices his life is a little better and maybe a mystery account has a few dollars or something? could be a reason to dive back in as well :) looking forward to more