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Left to fend for himself by his master who refused to teach him magic although having taught him 300 other skills. Follow as our protagonist uncovers his origin and becomes renowned in a world where the strong have the last say and magic is their spoken language.

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Nomad1791
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Story is well written and easy to fall into. Characters and world are good so far but seriously to early to leave a very in depth review. Check it out and see what you think.  

sparkleclean
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I love the story so far!  Reminds me some of King 's Dark Tidings.  I'm excited to see where the story goes!  Also happy about the frequent releases.  There is a good balance between character development and world bui!ding.  The author does not bog us down with endless info dumps with the entire history of a race or geographic area.  The backstory is given as needed to make sense in the current context.

There is also just enough foreshadowing at different points to get you excited about the future story arcs.  From the initial being fighting the dragon, to Lady Isabella, to the description of Ghost's future renown, it feels like the beginning of a great story.

The overall grammar and punctuation is very well done, with few errors noted.  The main character, Silver, seems mature and has depth.  So many stories being written today seem to have very shallow and immature characters it cheapens the story; not the case here.

Ton_Adusei
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After reading 11 chapters and haven't lost interest, like some stories on this site which are incoherent and jumbled up, that is a testament of how the author appreciate the art of story writing. Sure it seems like a generic story, set in a generic world but after taking a moment and looking closely at the story, you will find it to be different from these generic stories...... It has set it self apart. From the characters to the world building, you are able to see how the author carefully weaves and structures the story to mesh and co-exist with one another, the world building isn't as dreary, boring or super long but short and to the point and it delivers perfectly plus it has character and logical, which is a first for me.

In conclusion, I would say am hooked and I am looking forward to see what author brings to the table, however there are flaws in the story but I believe in time they would be flushed out.

Tkirkp1
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This story kinda reminds you of all those training and adventure story without the more cliche MC characteristics.  Firstly, the MC (so far) does not appear to be dense.  Second, like a true OP character should, the MC decides to openly be OP.  Thirdly, the main cast of characters in the story are all above 18. Sometimes authors have the characters start out younger and just treat them like an adult.

IDK that's just some of the stuff I liked about it that are not too spoilery.  You should definately give it a read. 

Lonestar
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Piqued my interest

I liked the name and how the summary started. I know how hard it is to grab the attention of most readers and this one did do that for me.  I really would like to see how he fleshes out that characters like certain personality traits and moral choices they make to define how the characters will act in certain situations. Other than that I hope efensys writing gets better and continues to improve to create a story he pictures to convey to his readers what he  wants people to imagine.  

raulks
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Needs more practice.

I feel like i'm reading about a good story from someone that don't know how to tell a story.