Luckiest person in the world!

by Voidne

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Dungeon GameLit Gender Bender Magic Male Lead Slice of Life Strong Lead

Voidne is the unluckiest person in the world. Just like his mother, he needs to work 5 times harder than normal people, just to achieve the same thing.

But one day the unlucky Voidne crossed through a wormhole by a mistake, that sent him into a parallel universe to occupy the body of the Voidne from that universe.

The new parallel universe was more advanced, and a new game was about to get released. It was a VRMMORPG, that is going to be super popular. Even companies were going to fight over occupying this game.

Voidne who was the unluckiset person in the world, is now the luckiest person in the world...

See how Voidne's life will change!

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Night_Shade0611
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So I saw your comment in chapter 11 and thought I felt bad but also how I enjoyed the story so here’s my ratings enjoy it with pleasure. BTW love the story keep it up!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I am currently on chapter 5 and I quite like the story so far. My only issue with it is that it is not quite believable. What I mean by that is first it never explains how he switches his body, like did he die or what? And while I understand he is supposed to be super lucky it makes no sense of why certain events would happen for example the three-hour wait he did to get in the game, was it a bug, did everyone go through it too, or did he just log on before the game was released. Then, the level 7 elite monsters which seem to throw themselves off a cliff, which should not be happening due to game designers actually make sure the game works properly before they release their games, also why would he gain items for somethings death which did not involve him doing anything? If he threw his dagger at the beast after watching it run off the cliff it would be a bit better, or when the boulder lands on the waterfall leopard. Also, the old man is dead how does he have items for sale? But other than it not being believable I haven't noticed many mistakes, granted I'm not really looking for them, but if you want a book where the MC is incredibly OP this works quite nicely.