Supreme Sovereign of Martial World

by Kinu456

Original HIATUS Action Fantasy Mystery High Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Ruling Class Strong Lead War and Military Xianxia

University student, Long Jun, transmigrated to another world, into the body of a young sect master of a deteriorating sect. Not only that, but he was also somehow come into the possession of a powerful system that would make him stronger by killing or completing quests and  literally allow him to do anything in exchange for ‘Merit Points.’

How to obtain these merit points?

Completing, System given missions. Helping people in need, killing crooked people and vanquishing demons. Thankfully, in this new world, where the law of the jungle prevailed, and strong devoured weak daily, where demons and devils were a common occurrence; gaining merit points would be as easy as taking a breath.

With a system that literally forced him to do good deeds, Long Jun started to take his first step towards becoming the Supreme Sovereign of this new world as well as many more.

P.S: The image doesn't belong to me. 

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dan.paulus
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Grammar errors are ungood

The spelling and grammar errors make this unreadable for me.  

octonus
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The MC is OP and has no personality other than doing the missions. This can still work provided there is a good overarching plot, and the fight scenes are good.

Fight scenes: "MC uses ability. Enemy dies. Gained a lot of XP." I'm not really exaggerating much.

Plot: It might exist, but I didn't see much (other than a mention in the prologue saying that it will appear eventually).

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An 'ok' read, i guess?

It's at the top 5 trending so i gave it a try, but its not my cup of tea.

If you want something that will make you go 'ooooohhhh!!' Or 'ahhhhhhh!!!' This is not it. But you should still give it a try just so you know for sure.

Commando2342
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Fine concept that lacks in execution

This story isn’t bad, but the grammar and dialogue holds back the fine if not groundbreaking story.

At times it really feels like there was some machine translation involved because the dialogue is just stilted and bad.

On the positive side, although it’s fairly typical Xianxia fare where the MC has to fight an uphill battle in a lowly sect, the story still has some interesting conflict brewing for the MC over the precise implementation of his power.

Characterisation is fairly typical - old wise tutor, young female maid for eye candy and a young master type who gets a sudden increase in talent from his specific power.

Ulvlar
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It is fairly meh all around, but the grammer is terrible

ContesaRubia
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So I just started reading this a few weeks ago,  and from these 9 chapters,  have found it to be both hilarious and interesting to read. 

Will have too,  read more chapters in the future for a better understanding and review. 

Avo
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An average power fantasy

It starts off as a reincarnation story set in a cultivation world, but the system to MC obtains soon becomes the focus of the novel quickly spoils the cultivation world's potential. The system also just gives the mc everything he wants, and also makes him immortal with a save system.

Ryker-10
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So sad when you are enjoying a book then it stops. Hopefully it is just a temp hiatis.