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Grekeren
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A mess you don't want to read...

The Sharingan gets activated when the user is experiencing great trauma, their life is at risk, etc.

The mangekyou activates when the person inserts the eyes of a blood relative which also must have the Sharingan into their own empty eye sockets. None of this has happened.

Since it seems to be random where people end up he will never see his sister again. and why would his entire family say yes to that stupid question?

And for the love of God use Grammarly so you can correct the grammar and bungled sentence structure. They have an app.   

Btw you reincarnated this dude in the worst possible spot, a place where magic and science is two sides off the same coin.