Wholly Undead

by Voidmirage

Original HIATUS Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Harem High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Ruling Class Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Join Jack, after his death by microwaved food, as he reincarnates into the body of a ruler of an undead kingdom in a strange environment of the underworld. Follow our, wannabe nihilist and socially awkward, hero as he learns about his world, and tries to play the part of their supreme pontiff and ruler of the Holy Kingdom of Deagoth.

The novel features heavy world-building elements, many characters, drama, cultivation, and magic.

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And here is a map to help understand locations, as they are mentioned in the story.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Unbelievable ago
Chapter 2:Cleanliness is next to Godliness ago
Chapter 3: A Recollection of a Battle past ago
Chapter 4: Shenanigans Are Afoot ago
Chapter 5: Hello Me. It's Me again ago
Chapter 6: Full Regalia ago
Chapter 7: Let's Play the King ago
Chapter 8: Clink.... ago
Chapter 9: Something's Different ago
Chapter 10: Responsibilities ago
Chapter 11: Have Faith ago
Chapter 12: A Long Nap ago
Chapter 13: Predictable ago
Chapter 14: The Holy Light and How to Swing it: Undead Edition ago
Chapter 15: Times are Changing ago
Chapter 16: Soul and Bones ago
Chapter 17: Anger before the Storm ago
Chapter 18: Last Chance ago
Chapter 19: Soul Discordance ago
Chapter 20: Taking Care of Business ago
Chapter 21: Vanity and Insidiousness ago
Chapter 22: Everything the Light Touches ago
Chapter 23: Are you sure? ago
Chapter 24: I'm Willing to be Your Monster ago
Chapter 25: Streaking Across the Skyline ago
Chapter 26: The Geist to do Business ago
Chapter 27: This is Where We are going to have a Problem ago
Chapter 28: The Overpowered Witch King ago
Chapter 29: The Biggest Bluff ago
Chapter 30: Mysterious Knowledge ago
Chapter 31: Machiavellian Evaluation ago
Chapter 32: Break upon our Bodies ago
Chapter 33: Unstoppable Force ago
Chapter 34: Immovable Object ago
Chapter 35: Her Lady Approaches ago
Chapter 36: Awkward Arrival ago
Chapter 37: The Same but Different ago
Chapter 38: Burnt Offerings are Made of These ago
Chapter 39: The Haunting becomes the Haunted ago
Chapter 40: Equivalent or Greater Exchange ago
Chapter 41: His Grace Returns ago
Chapter 42: This is Our Holy Witch King ago
Chapter 43: A Short Speech to Whip Up A Frenzy ago
Chapter 44: Disappointment leads to Decapitation ago
Chapter 45: Intimate Knowledge Needed ago
Chapter 46: Evening Tombs ago
Chapter 47: Climaxing Souls ago
Chapter 48: Reflection ago
Chapter 49: Delivered Myself to the Mad King ago
Chapter 50: Tears of the Skeleton ago
Chapter 51: The Attempt ago
Chapter 52: All the Chess Pieces move into Place ago
Chapter 53: Leave it to the Consort ago
Chapter 54: Banshee Queen... Really? ago
Chapter 55: Those with Tainted Souls ago
Chapter 56: The Faith of Deagoth ago
Chapter 57: The Legendary Super Skeleton... I guess. ago
Chapter 58: Willingly Exposed ago
Chapter 59: Offering Resurrection ago
Chapter 60: Heart Ache ago
Chapter 61: Are You a Divine Being? ago
Chapter 62: A Prophecy Overheard ago
Chapter 63: The Monument of Shame ago
Chapter 64: Ego Te Absolve ago
Chapter 65: A Risk of Sorrows ago
Chapter 66: A Disturbance in the Light ago
Chapter 67: Consorts & Catastrophes ago
Chapter 68: That's a Lewd Name ago
Chapter 69: The Tomes of Lexos Divinus ago
Chapter 70: The Prophecy Continues ago
Chapter 71: Our Business Stays with Us ago
Chapter 72: Mortals become Gods ago
Chapter 73: An Unexpected Source ago
Chapter 74: I Hope You Can Come To Hate Me ago
Chapter 75: Unexpected Alliance ago
Chapter 76: Black Tears Stain the Path to Desolation ago
Chapter 77: A Church Undivided and The Lexos Divinus Sanctus ago
Chapter 78: Demons of the Heart ago
Chapter 79: Sweet True Lies ago
Chapter 80: Men Love Lies ago
Chapter 81: A God Blows Out the Light ago
Chapter 82: Powered with Undead Inside ago
Chapter 83: Requesting to see the God-King? Audacious. ago
Chapter 84: I Hurt ago
Chapter 85: It Hurts So Good ago
Chapter 86: If It Wasn't For You ago
Chapter 87: Saved by the Knock ago
Chapter 88: Brutal Dead Souls ago
Chapter 89: True Death Discoveries ago
Chapter 90: Words to move a Patient; Words to move a Nation ago
Chapter 91: A God Laughs within the Light ago
Chapter 92: The Laugh that was heard around the Underworld ago
Chapter 93: The Day the Light went Out ago
Chapter 94: Tears Shed to Raise a Dead God ago
Chapter 95: Godly Amoeba of Light! The Death of a God's Pride ago
Chapter 96: I'll Stare Straight into the Sun Skull ago
Chapter 97: Too Lazy to Explain ago
Chapter 98: A God Watches from Above ago
Chapter 99: A God's First Steps in the Light ago
Chapter 100: Warbreakers ago
Chapter 101: An Unexpected Breakthrough ago
Chapter 102: Faith is a Weapon ago
Chapter 103: A New Kind of Warfare ago
Chapter 104: Don't Want to be Beaten by Nobody ago
Chapter 105: A Banshee Gossips ago
Chapter 106: Should Bone Beat Blood ago
Chapter 107: His Angels in the Light ago
Chapter 108: Two Down ago
Chapter 109: A Devil Plans a Party ago
Chapter 110: Coming Undone ago
Chapter 111: A Scream too Late ago
Chapter 112: Pride that becomes the Lie ago
Chapter 113: Is this the Power of the God-King? ago
Chapter 114: The Anger of a Wrathful God ago
Chapter 115: Spread the Name of the God-King ago
Chapter 116: The Blood Tide Approaches ago
Chapter 117: What is a God without Worshipers? Nothing. ago
Chapter 118: Hollowell that Ends Well ago
Chapter 119: Confessions within a Tomb ago
Chapter 120: The Love Prophet ago
Chapter 121: Sensual Geometry ago
Chapter 122: Holy Water Doesn't Hurt ago
Chapter 123: A Napkin of Scarlet ago
Chapter 124: Showing off ago
Chapter 125: Unleashing the Most Evil ago
Chapter 126: Lord of Schemes ago
Chapter 127: Just make me your Mistress ago
Chapter 128: The Real Reason, and a God's Cold Anger ago
Chapter 129: The God-King's Fanaticals ago
Chapter 130: So Many Churches need to be Built! ago
Chapter 131: The Call of Deagoth ago
Chapter 132: The Bet Fulfilled ago
Chapter 133: Friendzoned... For now. ago
Chapter 134: I am his Pet ago
Chapter 135: No More Blood left to Bleed ago
Chapter 136: The Spider Queen's Proposal ago
Chapter 137: Vampires hate the Light, so they will hate me ago
Chapter 138: The Vampire Princess Arrives! ago
Chapter 139: I'm a Skeleton... I don't have blood! ago
Chapter 140: I'm a Skeleton... I do have blood!? ago
Chapter 141: Trial by Holy Fire ago
Chapter 142: Can I be of Use to You? ago
Chapter 143: Freedom is like a Dream ago
Chapter 144: A Broken Soul Reforged ago
Chapter 145: FOR YOUR GLORY MY LORD!!! ago
Chapter 146: Merely a Tool ago
Chapter 147: Finally, Some Answers! ago
Chapter 148: It was Indeed Stupid ago
Chapter 149: A Demon of the Heart! ago
Chapter 150: A long Day makes for a long Night ago
Chapter 151: A Bath with a Vampire ago
Chapter 152: The God-King's Guide to the Omniverse ago
Chapter 153: Another Prophecy... Will they even end??? ago
Chapter 154: Crazy on You ago
Chapter 155: The Beginning of a Breach into Death ago
Chapter 156: The Breach into Death ago
Chapter 157: Even a God-King can make a Mistake... ago
Chapter 158: A Legendary Corpse Body ago
Chapter 159: A Deal for True Death ago
Chapter 160: Mountain Ape Hermit ago
Chapter 161: Stalling for Time! ago
Chapter 162: A Scream, not so Silent ago
Chapter 163: Light Drinker ago
Chapter 164: Dawn of the God-King ago
Chapter 165: Tell them Who sent you... ago
Chapter 166: Just who are you? ago
Chapter 167: The Laughter and Snores of a Blind Idiot God ago
Chapter 168: A Deal forged with Villainous Thoughts ago
Chapter 169: The Wheel Spins, again ago
Chapter 170: To Convince Death ago
Chapter 171: Death Laughed from Beyond ago
Chapter 172: Prophecies and Proposals ago
Chapter 173: The Riddle of... Currency ago
Chapter 174: Something Wicked this Way Comes ago
Chapter 175: The Time for War is Now ago
Chapter 176: Not you, not a King, not even a God ago
Chapter 177: What it means to give your heart away ago
Chapter 178: The Butcher becomes the Teacher ago
Chapter 179: Consulting the God-King, A Guide to Door Kicking ago
Chapter 180: A Lingering Scent ago
Chapter 181: You're telling the Truth! ago
Chapter 182: Finishing what was Started ago
Chapter 183: Coercing or Teasing... What's the difference? ago
Chapter 184: Soul Drunk ago
Chapter 185: Getting up to speed ago
Chapter 186: Sweet pain and Bitterness adrift ago
Chapter 187: The need to Kill ago
Chapter 188: The Start of the Coming of Age Ceremony ago
Chapter 189: The Coming of Age Struggle ago
Chapter 190: Aftermath of the Ceremony ago
Chapter 191: Coming a Second Time; Beginning ago
Chapter 192: Enter the Soulscape ago
Chapter 193: Retreat into the Soul ago
Chapter 194: At the edge of Insanity ago
Chapter 195: Over the Edge; Over again ago
Chapter 196: All Together Now ago
Chapter 197: Would you give your heart to him? ago
Chapter 198: Your soul is mine... ago
Chapter 199: What we do for Love ago
Chapter 200: Give him a Couch ago
Extra chapter: Herraclitus and the Couch of the God-King ago
Chapter 202: Can I play with Madness? ago
Chapter 203: Again, Something Wicked, this way, Comes ago
Chapter 204: Just a Touch of Madness ago
Chapter 205: Does the Princess wake up for Court? ago
Chapter 206: Preparing for Court ago
Chapter 207: The Third Court Session Begins ago
Chapter 208: Third Court Session Continues ago
Chapter 209: Third Court Session's Surprise ago
Chapter 210: Pissing off a god during the Third Court Session ago
Chapter 211: Judgment of the God-King ago
Chapter 212: All are useful to the God-King ago
Chapter 213: Court Adjourned; The Wandering Goat Continues ago
Chapter 214: Have you seen... The Yellow Sign? ago
Chapter 215: The Play down in Carcosa ago
Chapter 216: Temptations of the Yellow Sign ago
Chapter 217: He is the Key, the Gate, and the Guardian ago
Chapter 218: What has been Seen can't be Unseen ago
Chapter 219: Truth can hurt ago
Chapter 220: Can He be fixed?! ago
Chapter 221: Procrastination is Sometimes the Answer ago
Chapter 222: The Twin Gatekeepers ago
Where did these pages turn up??? ago
Chapter 223: A Black Mask follows close behind ago
Chapter 224: Eldritch Corruption ago
More of those pages that turned up??? ago
Chapter 225: The Thought that will Start a New Era ago
Chapter 226: Fed up and Getting her fill ago
Chapter 227: The Riddle of Flesh ago
Chapter 228: A Mix of Emotions ago
Chapter 229: I GOT TO GO! ago
Chapter 230: Finally they Meet ago
Chapter 231: The Meeting Continues ago
Oh??? What are these? ago
Chapter 232: NEVER DEFY! ago
Chapter 233: We are All going to Die ago
A tale of the Ruler of the Dreamlands and his Lover ago
The Answer to your Questions!!! ago
Chapter 234: Bone to Flesh ago
Chapter 235: The Historia Mortis Explains ago
Chapter 236: All are Equal in Death ago
Chapter 237: Enigmatical Pursuit ago
Chapter 238: A Fascinating Reunion ago
Chapter 239: Life Eternal ago
Chapter 240: Living-Dead Tissue ago
Chapter 241: Research to be Done! ago

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Zethuron
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Like Overlord, more bones and misunderstandings!

Overall this has been a fine story, though i coulnt help but to compare it to Overlord, with this story using many elements from there. This story is also somewhat cliched in the same ways as Overlord, but i dont necessarily consider that a bad thing.

This story starts in the Holy Undead Kingdom of Deagoth, where the Holy Witch King has been entombed for a thousand years. Then he reawakens, but not all is as it seems to be, for the Holy Witch King is not the person he was once, a reincarnee from Earth took his place and is put in his spot, without knowing anything.

The MC bluffs his way through the problems of his kingdom, and like Overlord, it somehow succeeds. One thing i do like about him, is that he does take action himself, even if he is a sort of coward on the inside, also expect him to do some references to other media in this story.

The other characters are fine, but i feel like they could be developed even more, to feel more real.

Sadly enough, grammar is a major problem in this story, with there being wrongly used tenses, many typo's and simple grammatical mistakes. I have to recommend the author to edit the story, or get someone to help him, it would improve the readablity of this story so much.

Currently a fast release speed, so no problems on that front.


This story is a fun, enjoyable read, even with its flaws. Recommend for anyone who likes a ton of misunderstandings, or just wants to read a story like Overlord.

Wiggy
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Good, but could be better.

This is a fairly entertaining story, though if you don't like overpowered MC's you definitely don't want to read this, because the main character has things come rather easily to him and people are constantly misunderstanding things in his favor. Still, while I typically get annoyed by that, this story does it in a humorous enough fashion that I'm more amused than annoyed. The characters all feel fairly distinct and unique, and the entire undead society is rather fascinating to read about, the author has definitely put a bit of thought into how his world works. My main gripe with the story is that the editing is brutally poor. Constantly uses the wrong words in a sentence, like comfirmable instead of comfortable, just, all the time. Even aside from using the wrong word, the phrasing is often really awkward and hard to parse at times. It's unfortunate, I really enjoy the characters and story, but it's dragged down by the presentation.

trashe1
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Puns. OP MC. Not-too-stupid MC. Might have more to offer than just funnies.

Reviewed at: Chapter 75: Unexpected Alliance

So I'm writing this review at chapter 50 (74) because this is where the story changed from "funny low-quality trash" to "huh, this might be a good movie?" to "Oh, this... is really funny and might have plot?"

  The first 3-5 chapters are terrible in many ways. It gets better quickly. Protag is OP from the start, all his conjectures are right, and awakens as king of the most powerful kingdom in the underworld. Some neat court antics, then the puns start in ernest, and it is glorious.

  Many of the puns are tongue-in-cheek, hidden in names, settings, and in character accents. They might not be accents, but I find it helpful and amusing to imagine a lot of the characters with various Southern US accents. Other puns and jokes take the form of absurd situations, snappy one-liners, and witty rejoinders. Pop/Counter/Otaku culture references abound. Also, the chapter titles usually bring a smile to my face.

  The story has barely begun. It is too soon to say if it'll end up good but it has the makings of something decent, at least. The villians aren't smart but they aren't stupid and there seems to be a huge epic/odessy style that'll be happening. It looks like it'll be good but I'm here for the puns.
  There is a harem, it starts early and is pushed for hard. Unlike most harem protags, he is actually pretty damn romantic with his main wife, doesn't expect women to be comfortable with crap treatment, nor for women to just fall at his feet. They do that anyway. Only one of the potential harem members (so far) is weird/forced, and she might not join, because it'd be weird. Hot but... weird.

  There are a lot of typos. Fortunately, the typos are generally homophones in various dialects of English, so they're like bonus puns. Half the time, you can't tell if the writer made a mistake or they are a genius. The other half of the time, you want to strangle them for not using  any grammar checker. Fortunately, the typos don't detract from the story enough for me to stop reading. As I said, helpful to imagine a southern drawl and all the typos are just part of their accent or bonus puns that the author didn't want to let go.
Ok, the typos get pretty damn bad, made worse by the fact you don't know if it is an intentional one or not. The story is too good for me to drop, though.

  Some reviews mention it is like Overlord and there are some parallels, I agree. The biggest difference is that while Ainz-sama had a bunch of murderous misfit monsters, Jack is an actual king with normal undead subjects, and only undead subjects, in a fairly enlightened kingdom compared to the Tomb of Nazarick. Second, more subtle difference is the MC is far less dense than Ainz.

  Another difference is that there is no emotional regulator that gives the author an out. MC has urges, acts on urges, feels love and hate, will make mistakes, and is generally rather human. Undead here have sexual urges. There is nothing erotic in this novel but there are 'sexual' situations. There are also some things that are... weird.

  The level of weird in this novel is a about same level as or a little less than that anime/LN with pretty backgrounds and clever wordplay I'm ashamed to admit I know about. You know, the one that made brushing teeth around family a potentially embarrassing matter? This novel is slightly less weird than that. Again, there is nothing erotic in this novel, so far. Skeleton kisses are strange, though, not as strange as stuff in Re:Ocean...which I also never read.

Yeah... So you should read this if you like puns, OP MCs, and have a reasonable typo tolerance...or a lava lamp/immiscible liquid fetish. You'll find out why I say that before chapter 50. Enjoy it!

Notsae
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  1. Highly interesting, even for as early as it is. A story of a far more ruthless man with modern knowledge being put into the position of a benevolent leader in a cultivation world as an undead. Seems to update frequently. Worth taking a look at, at the very least.

Edit: Now, later in the story, some developments have made this both more and less interesting. Although a humorous point worthy of note is the zombie apocalypse seemingly burgeoning in a world already ruled by the undead.

Bidao
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Good story, a lot of grammar error (I don't speak English, but I was able to see them). All in all it's good but I'm am not a fan of harem and I hat Japanese's novel because of them. I repeat the story is interesting but when the romance feel just like a Japanese novel. I know it is not for me

eugen siemens
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Hello all. I think that's a very engaging and humorous story and you should definitely read it.
 
Above all, the development of the main character is progressing very quickly. So personally, I'm very excited about the story and I've read 200 chapters in four days.  So, I'll give you 5 stars out of 5. 
 
The only thing I could fault is that the chapters come out a bit slow.
Sandsforever
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Early review...

Enjoyable read did not not notice anything annoying will come back to binge read when author posts more

Edit ch192 

Jesus christ I f'ed up putting this one off I enjoyed this immensely ( i couldn't remember any of the story so i reread it all in one sitting)

Some spelling errors and weirdness with phrasing but it didn't detract from the story enough for me to care

Tldr WORTH A TRY IF YOUR CHILL WITH OP MCS AND HAREMS

Silencer7
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PLEASANTLY SURPRISED. GOOD STORY!!

As of chapter 28, I can sincerely say that not only is this novel well written, there is also barely ANY grammatical and for one such as myself nothing is more off putting than an error pervaded story.


The MC is quite likeable?

One thing of note (to the credit of the author) is that most of the characters so far are well fleshed out (with political undercurrents, individual motives and all that, I do wonder though, How do skeletons bone? Do they even bone?) and several incidents hints to a quite exciting world.

Should the novel deliver on the promise of these aforementioned hints this book will definitely gain the recognition it will deserve.

AND of course the update speed is not too bad Ai?

Kudos to the author and I am definitely looking forward to more.

Atreivahavi
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Fun to read and has a LOT of easter eggs. I think it needs a faster pace and more jokes. Has less D&D shit and character depth than Overlord but I don't complain at all. Okay maybe needs a little bit more on the character side but very enjoying to read overall. 

SAmai
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Tldr: Guy reincarnated as lich-pope. Guy gets chick, kills half of parliament and kicks mafia posterior. 

Decent story without grammatical errors and boilerplate characters. Prose is a bit lacking but that isn't a detriment to the story. If you have time. Read this.