Misadventures of a Rampaging Demon

by Spectacular

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In a remote magical laboratory, buried deep beneath the earth, an unspeakable demonic horror is brought into the world…

Her name is Lilizath VekxZ’Kraugh (Lily for short). She enjoys cuddling, stargazing, and devouring the torn apart bodies of her enemies. The demon girl rampages across a fantasy world, satisfying her demonic urges while making friends with various terrified humans.

Meanwhile, an honest young lady leaves her peaceful life behind to embrace her destiny as the chosen one. Things go horribly wrong almost immediately and a random act of violence spares her from a very unpleasant evening.

Mature Content Warning: Contains gratuitous scenes of sex, violence, and violent sex. This story is not appropriate for younger readers, older readers, or anyone else, for that matter.

Author’s Note: This is my first attempt at publishing something I’ve written online. I’d love some feedback. Feel free to comment and let me know what you think of it and offer suggestions or criticisms.

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Almost Famous
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Only five chapters in, but this story is off to a very promising beginning. The setting and characters are interesting and already have depth. The non-human pov is also very well done here. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and the story overall feels well thought out and polished. Don't pass this story by, I hope the author continues this well into the future. 

Toyah99
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Can I give this story a six star rating? I'm always looking forward to another update. The world is well built and it doesn't feel like the stories that dig a pit in their plot just to have the walls cave in.

The characters in this story are all thought out beforehand and are a joy to learn about. They also fit very nicely together. There are very few things that keep me from giving the full 5 stars on this. I may even come back to update this score after some more of the side characters get fleshed out. Right now though the main character I can only sing praises about how well they are done as a true monster, while also being curious enough to stargaze. Very few authors are able to achieve such a believable main character, especially when they are non-human.

The style of this story has been excellent so far. The pov switches always hit the spot, giving the reader an outside view on the main character. They are never overdone, or overstay their welcome. 

I am not very good at grammar, or spelling, but I am confident enough to say that this story has very very few mishaps with it and it doesn't draw the reader away. Plus the author is likely to fix mistakes because they are very active in the comments.

This will probably be one of my favorites that every once in a while I just have to come back to reread, which I have already done so many times for this story. 

Ciaina
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Well written, perfectly balanced between lighthearted and shockingly direct. 

Protagonist is an adorable machine of death and carnage that walks between a cat and something born of the nightmares of the doomslayer. 

Brutal,sweet, funny, gory, silly, heavy and light. 

Read it. 

Yeah-uuh
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Surpirsingly good demon character

I didn't think I'd be this invested in the growth of a demon, but here I am.

This is the start of a pretty good story and I really just want to read more of it. The main character, Lily, is great. She's so precious sometimes and I love it. There's some good humor in here, too.

Also, it's really well written. I like it a lot, and even if it's probably to early for a 5 star... Here it is.

gaga gear24
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It's pretty awesome I enjoyed a lot

It's awesome it's awesome it's awesome and it's pretty awesome read it read it now are you die speaking words I can post this must have 200 characters or something read it read it now you will not regret it please read the story

DierBloodRose
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Holy shit this was awesome. I do sincerely hope you continue the story and continue to do a great job because this is fucking awesome. Well the other thing I got to say is update more please!😋