The Fastest Man Alive

by Dadrian Marshall

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Harem Male Lead Super Heroes
Warning This fiction contains:
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One mans journey to be the fastest alive, how will he survive the life of a meta human in the marvel verse.

Join Benjamin Blake as he tries to be better than the Flash in the marvel universe.

My own take of the speed force and its powers.

 

I own no rights to the X-men , marvel or DC properties.

This is pure fanfic so let’s all just enjoy ourselves and suspend  a little disbelief. 

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Ihateeverything
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the story is a power fantasy with stupid cliches, a fear of mom and dad, he is supposed to be an adult but he doesn't act like it at all, the grammar and punctuation is bad, no main plot, major holes in the side plots, the comedy is jarring and the action is bad, because with hat he has discovered he still gets fucked by the most basic villains for no reason.'

overall, don't read. it isn't even good for a niche of people, it's just bad.

Imp3rium
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Read up till chapter 20. A Great fanfiction. The start is a little bit shaky but the writing improves a lot in the later chapters. Looking forward for the next update.

Tranquilmoth
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Can't really tell if you're a native English speaker who just happens to be a bad writer or if you just don't understand enough about it to utilize it properly. That aside there are lots of holes and inconsistencies that annoy me to no small degree.

One such is the fact that when raven is introduced as Magneto's assistant, her last name is clearly stated. Then later he says her last name to her and they both react like he shouldn't have known when he was right there when she was introduced just minutes before. That happened in front of him and was clearly stated, how was he possibly supposed to NOT know.

It's not as bad as it could be but it nowhere lived up to its potential. If you get an editor or revise things properly yourself, this fic could be great, but as it is now it's hard to read. I practically had to turn my brain off to get as far as I did. Overall, not pleased with my reading experience. I won't 1 star you because that's cruel but you don't deserve more than that as this book stands.

The Vale
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Note - I only read 1.5ish chapters, with a skim over a few others. That was all I personally needed to see in order to know that I didn't want to read more.

Sentence structure and punctuation is quite bad, needs a lot of work. There's some lore flaws that annoy me a bit too, but we'll push those aside for the moment. The MC is pretty clearly a Mary Sue type - puts themselves above others socially, makes a point of pointing out the mc's intelligence and attractiveness, and mc is a bit of a douche.

The MC and poor sentence structure kill it for me.

Bigmaniii
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Awesome story so far really looking forward to more hope the author keeps it going!!!!! Can’t wait for the story to move along more in the uuniverse and we see more of the iconic hero’s and happenings from the movies 

rae1892
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Good story so far love that ur getting rid of some obstacles before the villians become a big problem but the oz formula is ut from the ultimate spider man series if so u could take a flying superheroes dna and combo it with that to give gwen flight . P.s. ignore the haters they're always going to find something to complain about like whiny little bitches. Keep up the good work.

aelevo
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Great, but need a m

good premise. need more polishing. especially on the grammar and dialogue part. first few chapters is very great with little grammatical mistakes. but then the dialogue part just became horrible. and sudden change with MC personality is just, well, sudden.

 

will stay and probably change the star when there's more chapter and more improvement.

Time_Keeper5669
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it is getting better has a lot of promise and i like the read it is like reading ironman when it first came out

keep at it.

moop
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Great job on the idea. Always thought the flash was the deadlyest man alive. With a quick shake of someone's head even iron man or doom . There brain turns to soup through enertia.

Grekeren
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The only gripe is the use of a katana, even if he is going the ninja route it's so overused.