The Fastest Man Alive

by Dadrian Marshall

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Harem Male Lead Super Heroes
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

 

Join Benjamin Blake as he tackles life in Marvel against all odds.

I do not own X-men, Marvel or DC properties.

This is pure fanfic so let’s all just enjoy ourselves and suspend a little disbelief. 

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The Vale
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Note - I only read 1.5ish chapters, with a skim over a few others. That was all I personally needed to see in order to know that I didn't want to read more.

Sentence structure and punctuation is quite bad, needs a lot of work. There's some lore flaws that annoy me a bit too, but we'll push those aside for the moment. The MC is pretty clearly a Mary Sue type - puts themselves above others socially, makes a point of pointing out the mc's intelligence and attractiveness, and mc is a bit of a douche.

The MC and poor sentence structure kill it for me.

Ihateeverything
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the story is a power fantasy with stupid cliches, a fear of mom and dad, he is supposed to be an adult but he doesn't act like it at all, the grammar and punctuation is bad, no main plot, major holes in the side plots, the comedy is jarring and the action is bad, because with hat he has discovered he still gets fucked by the most basic villains for no reason.'

overall, don't read. it isn't even good for a niche of people, it's just bad.

Tranquilmoth
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Can't really tell if you're a native English speaker who just happens to be a bad writer or if you just don't understand enough about it to utilize it properly("it" in this case being english). That aside there are lots of holes and inconsistencies that annoy me to no small degree.

One such is the fact that when raven is introduced as Magneto's assistant, her last name is clearly stated. Then later he says her last name to her and they both react like he shouldn't have known when he was right there when she was introduced just minutes before. That happened in front of him and was clearly stated, how was he possibly supposed to NOT know.

It's not as bad as it could be but it nowhere lived up to its potential. If you get an editor or revise things properly yourself, this fic could be great, but as it is now it's hard to read. I practically had to turn my brain off to get as far as I did. Overall, not pleased with my reading experience. I won't 1 star you because that's cruel but you don't deserve more than that as this book stands.

Psycho
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Read about 10 chapters, but it kept getting worse.

Author's greed ruined this fiction for me. Mc just had to have everything, looks, 'smarts', all the superpowers in one, AI, etc. And author bullshits his way to giving him all that. There is no nuance to this fiction. MC is too edgy.

Imp3rium
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Read up till chapter 20. A Great fanfiction. The start is a little bit shaky but the writing improves a lot in the later chapters. Looking forward for the next update.

KurisuMaroi
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While I understand the initial hate reviews (though honestly I've enjoyed the story since the beginning), the story has vastly improved. I'm honestly confused as to what those reviewers were expecting, it's a reincarnation/fanfiction story and the author has been very transparent about where the story was going from the first chapter.

Having a one star review on this story now is just insulting and not constructive or in the spirit of this site. (IMHO)

aelevo
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Great, but need a m

good premise. need more polishing. especially on the grammar and dialogue part. first few chapters is very great with little grammatical mistakes. but then the dialogue part just became horrible. and sudden change with MC personality is just, well, sudden.

 

will stay and probably change the star when there's more chapter and more improvement.

rae1892
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Good story so far love that ur getting rid of some obstacles before the villians become a big problem but the oz formula is ut from the ultimate spider man series if so u could take a flying superheroes dna and combo it with that to give gwen flight . P.s. ignore the haters they're always going to find something to complain about like whiny little bitches. Keep up the good work.

Zerfdin
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As a fan Fiction i think this story is good. There is a lot of power fantasy going on here but I really enjoy the story overall.

moop
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Great job on the idea. Always thought the flash was the deadlyest man alive. With a quick shake of someone's head even iron man or doom . There brain turns to soup through enertia.