Identity of the Abyss

Identity of the Abyss

by Jetstorm

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Is death the end or is it only the beginning? The exit is also an entrance.
Beings of power known not to man buried in the depths of history appearing only as legend.
Read the story of that which is and was. A tantalizing tale bringing with it an adventure unknown.

This is my first novel in royal road. Hope i get some readers...

Anyways, my writing tends to get a bit discriptive sometimes. You have been warned.

But hope you'll give it a try. Also I'm open to inputs and suggestions but will not necessarily follow.

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Fast-food, but boring fast-food

 It has an interesting, but overused concept. The author's style is weirdly languid and feels like he writes for money. Each and every chapter has filler and lack of content — in 25 pages I barely know what's happening. 

 

The wording however, is great and the author has impeccable grammar. It's just that he misses the point sometimes by using complex vocabulary when he doesn't need to and uses simple vocabulary when he needs to use complex vocabulary.

 

Plus, the main character is boring. I'll read since I have no more fast-food novels in my reading list, but otherwise I'd never even read.