Debacle: A Tale of Tails

by Thirsty_the_Wolf

Yrsanu, the grizzled, mange ridden, hotheaded old hyena lives amidst a near endless savanna alongside his less than forgiving packmates. He knows that an unfightable, unkillable danger is coming, but his packmates won't believe him. All of them shun him, except for Kkali, who is little more than a baby and only a hinderance to Yrsanu. 

Lukarin, Kirisa and Tsiqai, the amature cheetah cubs, relying solely on their mother to survive. One of them senses it too, but is too afraid to tell the others. 

When the unlikely group of animals find themselves clinging to their survival with their own bloodied teeth, fleeing from a danger they cannot hope to understand.

This is the end. 

This is the Debacle

 

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This is a must read. It captivated me at the first word. The plot is striking and the characters are anything but bland, despite how many they are and how short it is. Pls write more. Fast.