The Creator's World

The Creator's World

by wtaylorjr2001

In a world where Creators make universes to play in, I am a Creator.  My name is Michael Tanner and this is the exploration of my greatest creation.

It is a world of swords and sorcery, though I choose to be a sorcerer and perhaps a little more.

Join me as I explore this new universe, while in our universe, a mysterious extrasolar object enters this solar system on a collision course with our Earth's sun.

   

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The post-scarcity premise is novel, and wtaylorjr2001 has plenty of hooks establishing future subplots. At the same time, however, The Creator's World is also a little difficult to digest. The chief struggle I found was unvaried sentence structure in first person, making it a bit of a monotonous read, where the exposition began to feel like a list of actions rather than a living breathing story.

Looking forward to how the newly created dimension pans out for Michael Tanner, and how it effects his relationship with his home universe and the conflict developing there.