Kingdom Creation System

Kingdom Creation System

by DragonTreasures

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content

The World of Loreston was Erick Brighton's favorite Video Game.

He'd become one of the top players and constantly stayed up all night, competing in tournaments and avoiding any real commitments besides feeding his two plants. 

However, one night when he awoke, he was no longer in his house in front of his computer, but surrounded by Goblins, beautiful woman, and enough supplies to build a tower from the ground to the moon.

Turning into a Lord, one of the individuals gifted with the ability to create structures, he starts out as a lowly serf as he attempts to climb the social structure from a small, powerless villager into the king of the world! 


Warning: Contains harem elements, gore, and a ton of gamelit elements. 

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Firegod8969
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This story has an interesting idea. While I like where the plot is headed, for me there needs to be more world building. I think that if the story keeps the pace but adds a lot more details it could improve exponentially.