A really basic Litrpg system (practice story)

by SleepyWriter

Basically what the title tells you. Going to write a very simple game system and plot and get a feel for it. I have a problem of being overly ambitious or making stupidly complicated systems or ideas that I'm just either not good enough to execute to lose motivation too quickly to get anywhere. This is going to be a couple of test chapters to see how I feel.

Necromancer MC, gets spawned directly into a dungeon-like randidly ghosthound and the other 5000 litrpg that copies it. Different system. Terrible grammar and no proofreading to editing. (I will edit if someone wants to take the time to point it out to me, and I will read all comments and feedbacks thou)

Feel free to give user input on where the story should go or ideas

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