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Sergeant Gonzal had a very good nose for trouble.

But this time, rather than the Cloning vats, the reek of things rotting came from the Mess Hall.

 

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"Off the Vat" is a complete, very short novel (around 20,000 words across 7 chapters), inspired by the recloning mechanic that Sci Fi MMOs like EVE Online or The Repopulation use to explain why players respawn.

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Herko Kerghans

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