The Ladies Gang Puppet Leader

by Roeselawik

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

My name is Caiden Black. I am a 17-year-old ordinary guy you can find anywhere in the world. My life’s ambition is to propose to my childhood friend; Lily Storm. I was all prepared, but my destiny decided to do me over and through a series of extreme unfavorable events, which include raping Lily, I am now surrounded by a bunch of women and being forced to become the head of their ladies crime organization…

Someone save me…

Note: This story takes place in Arasia, a planet almost exactly the same as Earth. Only the geography and a few little things are different.

 

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xenofixus
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This is basically just femdom smut. The MC can't stand up for himself except in his head. People are abducted off the streets in front of bustling public institutions and the police are nowhere. Teenagers are walking with guns and cars and no questions are asked. The MC is forced to rape his love interest but she later decides it is okay because she loves him.

It is like the author is trying to build up to some grand unveiling but the problem is that it (so far) never comes. So you are constantly on edge waiting for the other shoe to drop.

One of the commenters has also claimed that this is vanilla all the way and that is factually wrong. The author themselves has said there will be netori (and based on the context of the story it will likely be rape). Netori is not vanilla. Rape is not vanilla.

This story really needs the grimdark, psychological, and traumatizing content tags. I am giving it 2/5 because it is well written even if mistagged and completely NOT my cup of tea.

Sam1515
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A great erotic story with good characters

I found this story on diffrent Site plus i also finished one of my favourite novel there, so like every other avid reader , i was under going withdrawl symptom and to great relief of lowly me Author posted his story there and with its erotic and modern setting it hooked me.

First of all as you can guess from title it's a single guy with massive harem and it's only been 2 days in story and Mc has met at least half a dozen potential love interests so if are looking for a story with epic writing or no harem this isn't for you, also this story will have sex lot's of lot sex so, prepare the tissue.

But don't think lightly of this story bcoz it's like breather after a long marathon of finding tarshy novels plus characters are easy to understand to  (but i could be wrong ) and have their own role in the story.

Mc is still a wuss but i have hopes that Author man him a bit and is able to reveal vulunerability of charcters to reveal their motive's and history of characters plus it's Author's first story as far as i know so, expect wish fullfiment in story.  

I think this story will have it's flaw despite my full rating so PLZ DON'T USE WHIPSS.

Thanks reading my crapy review and I hope you like this story as much as i do.

BigBoss828
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THIS DOESNT HAVE NTR!! ITS VANILLA ALL THE WAY!

Dive right in to the story and there is no drama with the heroine like she'll ignore the mc that lasts until chapter 500 or something. No sir. The rapey part was cleared up early so no pseudo-ntr where the heroine gets together with generic rich douchebag A-kun so if the rapey part is holding you back in reading this novel, i guarantee you to just continue reading and it wont be an issue anymore.(hell caiden even gets a better deal lol lucky bastard he is)

InfantryTerminator
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This clearly needs NTR and traumatizing content warning. If you can handle rape and other questionable things, then this might be for you.

Nothing to complain about grammar, but the story seems like a screwed up smut. MC looks like a total sidekick and worldbuilding doesn't make any sense, so don't expect interesting story about life of criminal organization