Heavenly hands

by Catlord

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

William "Many-hands", is an alchemist, a builder of automata.

In one world he died to save the one he loved the most, in another, he is reborn as a babe. I invite you to read how through ingenuity and determination, he reached the heavens and proclaimed that this was unacceptable. 

 

 

 

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This is a bunny that I've had hopping around for a while, it'll be a xianxia story, I think it will be a fun ride, might need the help of a couple of hands shaping it up though. If you have any recommendations or critics leave a review, pretty please. 

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review posted 7 hours after chapter 1.

 

it is good.

 

Thank you, have a nice day.