The Dungeon System

The Dungeon System

by Isaac Darby

Warning This fiction contains:
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A Curse goes wrong, a prophecy is mentioned, a dungeon core is created. 

 

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Isaac Darby

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delta33
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The first chapter was an intresting hook, still too early to know how it goes. Seems to be a twist on the dungeon core trope.

Can't wait to see where this goes!