The Rise Of The Strongest Tyrant

by Daishouri

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Female Lead GameLit LitRPG Magic Mythos Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead Supernatural Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

The path one walks only becomes clear when one is halfway through.

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Joary
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title objective complete

so log horizon, but only some people got sucked in, and the game was just released, and everyone stuck gets a cheat in the form of a unique race/class/skill. The story is a bit weak, but in a way that screams inexperience rather than incompetentence, and as the author gains experience writing it has the potential to improve. The grammar flows and is at professional standards. The style is consistant, and I can't really say more atm. the characters are consistant in their beliefs and their actions reflect them, but one in particular has a glaring issue (and is one of only 5 named NPCs, two of which died on screen already), he is fucking dumbass and idiot yet he is mayor and has enough clout after a decade of monster attacks to retain the middle aged members of the village in there instead of fleeing.

Side note/complaint: the title is bogus, she already is the strongest tyrant from the moment she gets the class, it's a UNIQUE class, but then again so are Necromancer and Summoner and Blood Mage.....

OxenThunder
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*woof* stat dump *woof* stat dump *woof*

I got *woof* buried in *woof* stat dumps  *woof* and the *woof* animal woofing. 

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