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Alphonso Alonso

Alphonso Alonso

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Jangofet54
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Just after the first chapter I can tell that the grammer is going to be well done (if it doesn't suddenly take a nose-dive), the voice of the MC came off very well in the limited content available and I'm egarly awaiting more anywho gonna drop this here may do a more advanced review later say after 10 chapters but give this a spin.