The Black And White God

by ComitScooterAnkl

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Short Story Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Secret Identity Strong Lead Super Heroes Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

One day the god of destruction and creation also known as the god of black and white got bored after watching over the planet ‘Earth’ he decided he wanted to make himself his own world. After trying to sleep for 10,000 years so his world could advance he woke up early!

 

If this novel has really poor grammar/ Punctuation, I'm sorry.

  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score
  • Total Views :
  • 168
  • Average Views :
  • 84
  • Followers :
  • 5
  • Favorites :
  • 1
  • Ratings :
  • 1
  • Pages :
  • 1
Advertisement
Remove
Table of Contents
Reviews

Leave a review

ForestRage
  • Overall Score

Interestingly Short...

The first chapter piques the reader's interest but its too short. Might be better suited as a prologue. The writing flowed smoothly and your grammar on a skimming read did not scream of errors. Unless you face a true critic of the English language you are safe for now...

The spacing, however, needed to be fixed. It's like double spacing and makes it hard to read. If you continue along with the light novel format, I don't see much problems unless your story crumbles.

Keep Writing!