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Her job was to debug and keep functioning the simulations in a VR environment the Military uses to train soldiers 

she was designed to think rationally, not to feel anything. 

to understand data and numbers, not feelings. 

to always remain as a digital entity... 

Everything changed the day one of her creators gave her different orders and had irrational behaviors.

That day she started to fell in love









Author's note: English is not my native language, if you find some errors in my grammars let me know, I'll gladly make pertinent changes :)

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