The Void King

The Void King

by TrueDarkness

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

So after reading books for my entire life I have thougth it time try my hand on writing one. This book is currently in its early stages and due to that i can not,not for lack of trying mind you, come up with a Synopisis for this book with out feeling it would give away its entire story. In fact the only reason i am even posting it is from the uging of several friend to get my work out there and see what others think. I read books regardless of the synopsis any way, so it cant be that important can it? Regardless if you are reading this i hope you enjoy it. If not. Oh well. 

Postinote: Feel free to hit me with all your criticisim, After all i cant get better without it.  

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doomslayer57860
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I like the Ideas you are running on. The I dea of there being another void being, and everything else that is going on is interesting. You have a few errors with words that can be confusing in ch 9. They are just switching words like their, and his. Simple mistakes. 

Other than that I love the way its going. 

Keep writing.