Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy GameLit Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Slice of Life Strategy Virtual Reality
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Declan is just your average teenager who got involved with a not so average event. Now he's invited to 'play' in a world that is somewhat more realistic than the real one. There will be shenanigans, there will be a lot of characters and there will be a guild. 

 

Hello, this is a pretty basic VRMMORPG which I started writing out of boredom, don't expect anything too great here, it's mostly slice of life comedy shenanigans with no real plot since I can't reliably include stakes in a game setting where respawning is a thing. I'll try to upload at least once a week but real life stuff may get in the way occasionally.

**WARNING** Protagonist comes with an inbuilt wizard hat.

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Brayden
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This book is quite a ways a-head of the game.

It's well made, as of chapter 2.0, and contains no small amount of, very specifically, cabbage puns. The main character hasn't had a lot of time to flesh out, but so far seems more than one-dimensional. Hope it turns into something great.

MoltenMatrix
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Do reviews need a title?

I felt compelled to review this as it has none currently. I can’t tell what makes a good book or a bad book but what I can tell you is that this entertains me and I want more. 

I am and a sucker for unique and weird things and as it turns out mushrooms.

Give this a try yeah.

 

Kap
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Cabbages and Goats so far

Interesting racial design, real world feel advanced but from a natural progression as opposed to near magic science. Gotta love characters not afraid to say fuck you too. Warning: Puns. That is all

vini_kal
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Nice story overall. 
I feel this one is going a long way if the author doesn't quit it for whatever the reason. (Please, don't, I like mushrooms)
That said, step up the pun game, the mushrooms deserve it.

Stephen Lewis
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Ch 2.6 

All in all enjoyable light read

Story that doesn't take itself seriously (not in a bad way)

Seems that the characters will have some dimension to them 

Enjoyable writing style so far I dont remember anything super annoying that pulled from reading this

JeanDRacc
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So far its intersting and good. Will update when I am done with all chaps. Might take me a while.