Welcome to the Dungeon

by Justin K

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Dungeon Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos

[Welcome to the Dungeon: Black Tower, weary traveler. System update will commence.]

When I heard this message, I thought I was in a dream. I was wrong. This was not a dream, and I soon found out I would play an important role in the future of the planet, even though at that time I thought it was just for fun. Along with Blackmail I will fight in this dungeon, meet a new friend, and hopefully save the planet

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blindfox
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This has alot of points where it seems that it can be good but just falls short he powers way to fast even for op char its insanly fast he meets a fairy marrys her without knowing cool stuff instantly they start saying i love you no sence just confusing amount of skills needs boxs for skills honstly he just uses smaller text kinda hurts my eyes i was hoping for it to get better read to 20 before i couldnt anymore