Evolutionary Prison

The first part of the story was really weird but it made much more sense as the stroy progressed. On chapter 50.

A good story overall, worth a read if you're bored and want something in the genre, but not a masterpiece or a must-read.

Style is good, though a bit rushed, for lack of a better word. The action is densely packed and doesn't leave much room to process what you've read.

The story is good as well, but again, feels a bit crammed in. The twists and paradigm shifts come too quickly and densely to really for expectations or theories, and so lose a lot of their punch. The overall story though is quite good, and the world is colorful and interesting.

Grammar is OK, though lacks polish. There's a good number of odd little phrases that aren't quite right, and quite a few homophone mixups. 

The cast of characters is very small, but for the most part enjoyable to read. They end up a little... Off by the end, and don't seem amazingly deep, but they seem at least reasonably three dimensional. 

Needs work but is an enjoyable read with almost nonstop action, a little bit of sexy time, awesome imaginative monsters, and mindfuckery.

20 chapters in, and the story’s been consistent so far. Good paced action and progress. Characters are somewhat simple but hints at potential depth in the future. Good job author 👍🏿!

Chapter 50

I enjoyed this some of the stuff is a little jarring (not in a bad way ) 

I will probably come back and binge read more

Really interesting and lots of little twists. The author continues on another site if you're wanting to read the next book.

Read it all from chapter 1 through 50, loads of action even if story was a little long to progress but when it did it seemed to shoot off with plenty of twists an turns I look forward to seeing this story through.

Interesting plot, 

good grammar with few mistakes,

a small let down on evolution. 

That's how I would describe this novel.

Now, you may think that you wouldn't want to read this novel because the evolution part of it is a bit of a let down, right?

Not really. The way he evolves, the way he chooses his evolutions and how he manages it and what he does with them is above what I expected. 

What is below my expectations is the process of evolution. 

Just grab a fingernail from a creature you just killed, put it in your machine and you're evolved.

I expected something more from the grand process of evolution, but the rest is pretty well done.

All in all I would recommend this story 8/10 times. 

Read chapter 49

Everything is happening to fast and after chapter 25 I am not invested in the story anymore since there is nonstop action or plot progression.

Its been a while since a found such a great read it has plot for sure and a great premise cant wait for more