The Eleventh

by Riddley

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23 year old Alice D'Lucia- A Mechanical Engineering undergrad. Young, bright and sadly a tale cut short. His life abruptly ends when the Grim Reaper pays a visit. Before him lies an entire world of adventure, but what does it cost him to reach it?

In essence, his identity. More than that though, she finds herself in a place on the precipice of civil war, and she's caught right in the middle of it.

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