Survey Report of System AQ275-43L-991

by HeWhoLooksSkyward

Original COMPLETED Historical Sci-fi Short Story Non-Human lead Space Opera

An automated probe has arrived at its destination. It's mission? To evaluate the possibility of colonization.

...but it is about to discover far more than it ever imagined.

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Baemah1012
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A Nice Introduction to a new storyline

Now I’m not good at all that English stuff so I can’t say too much but I think your writing style is nice and flows well. I love the basis of the story and I wish there were more like it!! Keep the posts coming please so I have to read!

 

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Fleischmann
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All right, so this is was a nice little short story that I found relaxing. It is done in the format of a probe's log and might seem boring to most others, but I quite enjoyed it It is a weird thing and worth a look at in my opinion.