So What If I'm a Summoner Who Only Wants Fluffy Creatures?
A year ago, having lost the golden retriever that had accompanied him for fifteen years of his life, a retired sixty-odd years old man decided to distract himself by trying his hand at the MMORPG Elysium Online. One year later, he's now known as Aurelius, a Summoner who desires nothing else other than cute and fluffy creatures regardless of their actual strength. Due to his principle and tenacity for fluffy creature, Aurelius eventually obtained the [Holy Feathered Dragon] a high level creature that was considered inferior to it's dark counterpart, the [World Ender Dragon]. However, soon after he had obtained the Holy Dragon, it was discovered that the strongest raid boss of the latest update, the [World Breaker Behemoth] is indeed, weak to those with [Holy] attribute.
And so, together with his guildmates and friends, Aurelius challenged the boss and after a difficult battle, finally defeated it and obtained the top spot of the fastest clear time for the boss. As they celebrate upon their victory, a rift opened up in the middle of the boss field and out of curiosity, Aurelius and the rest went on ahead and tried to interact with it. The result was that they were all suck into the rift and arrived in a parallel world.
Separated from the other, Aurelius found himself in a kingdom of humanoid creature with animal-like features such a ears and tails and that he himself, is the hero they have summoned to fight on their behalf. Determined to find his friends and protect these fluffy animal people, Aurelius now stand against the demon invasion with his various fluffy summoned creatures at his side.
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As a story it is rather interesting and I feel starts off well. The initial characters are interesting and the getting started in the new world fun to read. It has a solid intial basis to be a great story.
Unfortunately as it gets further and further into the story I feel it gets very difficult to follow. The point of view shifts rapidly between various people, the characters get numerous and shallower and the story loses a lot of focus. As of chapter 65 I've honestly lost all possibility of understanding what is going on between the corrupted/non corrupted, keepers and who's on what side and why. No hope of getting it back either at this stage I think either. The writing itself is pretty good which helps but I feel like I need a flow chart and diagrams to figure out the plot and characters.
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The concept of the story is pretty intriguing, but the way it was implemented hurts the story in my opinion.
First, off we have the MC being nerfed by losing some of the creatures he can summon so that he is seemingly left with only 2 summons a rabbit, and an angel. However, it is shortly reduced to one. This is a bad way to start off a summoner story that was supposedly an end game summoner in an MMO game. I always dislike stories that use hamfisted nerfs to characters for no reason other than plot development.
Next, we have it where low leveled enemies are capable of nearly killing an end game player in this new world. I mean what is the point of mentioning the levels if they do not matter. At that point, they become an arbitrary number. Which in the end means it is worthless and exists only to fluff the story as it serves no real purpose.
Those 2 points alone make it more than enough for me to not want to read any further. If you wanted to start a story where someone was transported to another world you should have stuck with a beginner player or noob. Because then some of the plot developments in the first 9 chapters would not be so bad in comparison. In fact, it would be a great plot development due to the summoner being able to use MP again instead of SP which would buff the heck out of the summoner class in this world. But instead, it is overlooked by several nerfs to the main character in the first 9 chapters.
I think this story would be great if it committed to the main character being an overpowered end game character or the main character being a low leveled player. Rather than you trying to have the best of both worlds. If you want your character to grow stronger over time, make the main character a noob or low-level player. If you want him to be overpowered with many summons to choose from. Then try to do what overlord did and make the story interesting even if the main character is one of the strongest known people in the world.
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the chapter are pretty long and have decent grammar for a new writer, it the old usual summoned Isekai thing, but as a summoner with fluffy animal instead, the release also quite fast so it a plus, will read more to get a full picture to give more detail review then