Our Goddess

by Natron77

Akari Mamori is a huge fan of Shintoism, from its modern practice to its ancient legends. As much as she’d love for those fantastical myths to be true, Akari doesn’t put too much stock in stories of gods and spirits with human-like forms and magical powers. Until she meets a genuine goddess and gets recruited into her harem!

Rated Mature for a lesbian polyamorous harem, periodic nudity, and occasional sexy times! (no explicit on-screen sex at this time)

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Ch 1 - The Shrine ago
Ch 2 - The Spirits ago
Ch 3 - Recruitment ago
Ch 4 - Moving In ago
Ch 5 - Telling Tails ago
Ch 6 - Rendezvous ago
Ch 7 - Crunching ago
Ch 8 - Welcome ago
Ch 9 - Tests ago
Ch 10 - Bribery ago
Ch 11 - Competition ago
Ch 12 - Consequences ago
Ch 13 - The Festival, part 1 ago
Ch 14 - The Festival, part 2 ago
Ch 15 - Nine Tails ago
Ch 16 - Running Wild ago
Ch 17 - Homewrecker ago
Ch 18 - An Unwelcome Addition ago
Ch 19 - What's in a Name? ago
Ch 20 - Seeking Answers ago
Ch 21 - Turmoil ago
Ch 22 - Memories ago
Ch 23 - Boiling Point ago
Ch 24 - Intervention ago
Ch 25 - Scramble ago
Ch 26 - Give and Take ago
Ch 27 - Questions and Answers ago
Ch 28 - Clean Body, Dirty Thoughts ago
Ch 29 - Changes ago
Ch 30 - A Vision of Beauty ago
Ch 31 - A Feast for One ago
Ch 32 - Revelation ago
Ch 33 - The Day After ago
Ch 34 - Awaken ago
Ch 35 - Aki Matsuri, Part 1 ago
Ch 36 - Aki Matsuri, Part 2 ago
Ch 37 - Fallout ago
Ch 38 - Tracking ago
Ch 39 - Showdown Under the Bridge ago
Ch 40 - Holidays, part 1 ago
Ch 41 - Holidays, part 2 ago
Ch 42 - Holidays, part 3 ago
Bonus - Character Bios ago
Ch 43 - Holidays, part 4 ago
Ch 44 - Future and Past ago
Ch 45 - Progress ago
Ch 46 - The Curious Cat ago
Ch 47 - The Path Forward ago

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Watto-chan
Overall

This is a good story. It has all the yuri charm from yurisume, with a fresh take at the franhise. I think it would be great if somehow, the two storys would cross, like when museume went to ski lodge kobold. Keep up the good work.

Pyottl
Overall

Pretty much what the blurb advertises. Human heroine goes to live at a shrine with a bunch of "spirits" - who just all happen to be sexy women, as they are wont to be. 

Prose is pretty decent and proofreading excellent, but they are sometimes moments when things feel a bit simplistic/clunky/... not quite as good as they could be. Ie, in the beginning there's a "Matsuri festival", but matsuri already means festival, so this is rather awkward. Likewise, with the Japanese health care system the situation concerning the heroine's father seems out of place - that probably wouldn't have happened. Things like these.

I think a bit more in terms of plot wouldn't hurt, and the 'ecchi' component is a bit of a mixed back. It's not actually erotic, but still pretty prevalent ... kind of in 'nowhere' territory right now.