Congratulations, You're Dead!

by SimonSaysWrite

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Romance High Fantasy Magic Reincarnation Ruling Class Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
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"Uh, whatcha doing there System-chan?"

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"You know they can't understand you right?"

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"No need to get rude.  Fine, I'll leave you alone to do the synopis."

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"Well, you heard the lady, go read it."

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KoboldPatrol
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Slice of Life with sex, love it or hate it

(as of chapter 24)

'Congratulations, you're dead!' is set in a fantasy setting and at first glance appears to be just another leveling story. That changes very quickly after the MC meets the two other characters who then accompany him. From there it is a Slice of Life story with magic elements. As of chapter 24 it told about the journey to the capital and what happened on the way (can't say more because of spoilers). As the term Slice of Life implies, the focus of the story is on the tiny slices that happen with lots of descriptions and only very little focus on an overarching plot. It's told in third person internal style from the MC's point of view, the descriptions are good. There's also a significant amount of comedy. Grammar is good and spelling is excellent.

There are two problems that I (and I know that these are very personal preferences) have with this story. One is the characters: The MC, by nature of the way he was reincarnated, is totally overpowered. Within moments of arrival he wields incredibly great magical power and that only becomes more within days and weeks. At his low level he already has better magic than (no spoiler, let's call it "high-level mage in important position") and he creates detailed works of art and (re-creates/projects) modern movies just by wiggling his little finger. This leads to the story being a bit boring because there is no struggle. No struggle at all, everything the MC wants to do works splendidly on the first try. And who or what could be an obstacle to a mage that notices every little detail from a mile away before casually creating things never seen before by the people? The other thing I could live without is the large amount of sexual content (some 'only' romance, some very graphic Spoiler: Spoiler

  ), he quickly meets a girl and they fall in love sweeter than diabetes. Speaking of diabetes, there's also paragraph after paragraph about food.

I'm sure that other people love exactly what this story shows but I guess I'm just not the target audience for Slice of Life stories.

Waffle(est)
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Who stole my immersion? :(

Really addictive, decent grammar and interesting concept.. but so immersion breaking I literally can't read this anymore. (Original review as of  #28 https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24698/congratulations-youre-dead/chapter/367321/28 )

There is too much wish fulfillment and hand-waving and the characters all seem to completely ignore any social context. Sorrel was so careful creating the character and taking the camoflage etc and yet in the end he keeps drawing attentinon to himself and showing off, a bit of a disconnect eh?
Also, this is a feudal society and yet he doesn't even try to (or think of trying to) show any sort of respect to royalty.. wtf!
It's a wonder how the MC isn't yet the enemy of the state with all the buullshit and carelessness he operates with.
Sorrel can also emulate seemingly any modern technology by just wishing hard enough.

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So.. there comes a time (#43) where Sorrel gets his level doubled (its only like 6 levels so not as op as it sounds) at the end of one chapter only for a god to show up in the very beginning of the next chapter (about 5 sentences later) and remove 90% of all the stat gains he got from that, literally calling it a "nerf", and also applying the nerf going forward making that huge pile of karma spent on grown boosts worthless. Aparrently the author does not think that maintaining the main characters agency or any integrity of cause and effect is of significance to the quality of a book.
The rule of the game like system dictating things got thrown in the trash, all system based progression from hence forth and in the past has zero meaning. And gods intervening directly means that all the MCs accomplishments now ring hollow.

Nomad1791
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Not bad. I started and caught up to chapter 15 today. First off not a lot to judge on but here goes. Story isn't bad it's well written with few if any mistakes. The characters are decent and the author is trying time and effort have been put into it. Now for the bad. Mc is Messed with by a unknown entity and has every reason to be a dark gritty anti hero badass. We get a super fluffy op mc in a rainbow world were the darkest thing is two almost rapest bandits that for catching he has everyone's love. Two bandits? Seriously? The romance is forced to the extreme I'd believe the "love" more if he was using plant spores as a mind control but nope just instant op fluffer mc. Take my criticism with a grain of salt I like much grittier stories and this isn't my style. If you want something light and easy to read that's actually pretty well written this is perfect for you.

some_total_kretin
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THE STUFF DREAMS ARE MADE OF

The premise is basically dream of every lonely depressed ugly fourteen year old, who's pining after the school beauty. I can tell because this was basically dreams I had when I was around that age. The story has the inherent problem associated with it, those being that when we get to the end of length of a standard dream session the fun suddenly ends because the author can't continue to let his subconscious mind make the decisions. And that means that the bad writing and inconsistent pacing starts to show itself.

The dialogs are cringey and sound automated to get the exposition across, although not all of them. The hero is the universally likeable everyman who is instantly liked by everyone and everything and is also the super duper unique really bad Mary Sue. The girl is flat uninteresting cutout of "girly qualities" basically existing because the hero needs someone to care about and stick his knob into. The main problem is she exists not as a partner for the hero but basically as a pet. The inequality between hero and her is so large that hero could as well have bought a potted plant and it would have the same effect. And the buildup is basically nonexistent. The hero gets everything basically by existing around it and can for all we care act like a total antisocial jerk and people would still love him even when he sets their dog on fire.

The only thing that makes the first few chapters readable is the ackwardly funny premise and the humor starts wearing really thin really fast. By the time the hero finds the only existing dungeon far and wide and basically sells it for an unimaginable wealth in the middle of the starting arc any possible future development goes up the window because only an apocalyptic extinction event can possibly present a problem and that is not going to happen in this style of story because the narcissism of the hero would not have anything to reflect itself into.

One star for readable start that descends to hell quicker that you can blink.

 

UsernameJ
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Openly sexual or thinly veiled misandry?

As of chapter 90 this story went from mediocre to fucking garbage. More typical man-hating Women Are Wonderful nonsense.

If you're an insane feminist type that firmly believes the patriarchy is out to get you, then by all means continue reading this story. If you aren't, then go do something better with your time.

forged
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A solid high fantasy story, with some comedy. Nott fast paced at all as of yet (which I like). The romance is a little forced, but other than that, all around a fun read.

Inslayer
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Pretty good of a story

Well, I won't be too detailed in this review as it's still early in the story, but I will say that it's definitely worth a read. 

I mean, don't go by my word to read things, but if by the 8th chapter you haven't loved the story, feel free to dislike my review.

Edit: we've come far from that 8th chapter.

Well, the overall score goes down.

Some moments for character development feel forced, not all, but I cringe at those moments. 

Sex scenes are stupid... you would do well to skip them. 

Style score remains the same 5/5

Story score remains the same 4.5/5

Grammar remains the same 4.5/5

Character score goes down at 3.5/5 but goes up again from the parts where the author doesn't ruin the character development at 4/5

Overall score goes down at 4.5/5

Still recommend reading it. It has a fast release pace, interesting chapters with interesting characters and interesting story. 

 

Scipio231
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Dont let the summary put you off.

I'll be honest, I almost didn't start reading this story due to the somewhat lacking summary. Only the good reviews saved it and I'm glad I did. It's pretty entertaining even if the romance is a little heavy handed. I'm looking forward to more in the future.

ehutch79
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As of chapter 55 or so the mc has replicate cars,  video games, cell phones, among other things. He’s created impossible magical artifacts. He’s defeated a foreign army. Too much of a Gary Stu, that it’s not even OP fun anymore. 

NastySquire
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This story starts out well enough. You get a guy reincarnated into a new world with magic which he begins to explore. A light, fun read up until he makes it to the capital. After that it's constant bad sex puns, and all the characters crying about how hard of a day they had. Very literally in almost every chapter they cry or have a talk about their emotions. I can't continue this.