Transcending Is More Than I Thought

by EnzoBit

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Dungeon
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40 years ago, the planet Earth was overrun with monsters. An interface also suddenly appeared which allowed Humans to go beyond their limits and hunt these monsters.

Jake had reached the pinnacle of all Humans but quickly became bored, seeking enjoyment, Jake clicks on the 'Transcend' option. An entirely new world is open to Jake, watch as he figures out this new world and the new interface. Will his adventures lead him to enjoyment, or something much, much bigger?

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This is my first time trying to write a proper novel. All criticism is welcome so I can improve on my work. Hopefully, it isn't too bad at the start. Chapters will also be released mainly when I finish one, could be one a day or one a week.

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