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In the real world, Byron Jones has a dead-end job and strikes out with women, so he jumps at the chance to escape into a sci-fi themed virtual reality RPG called "Venus Online." Once inside the game, he discovers he can't leave, but when he's flying a cool spaceship, fighting aliens, and loving hot women, does he really want to?

This and the five other books in the Venus Online series are available at Amazon.

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