The Beginnings of a New Path

by CKOneCanobi

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Harem Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Max Drago was out searching for supplies for his mother when he ends up in a fight for his life.  Becoming injured he ends up saving a legendary creature, then bonds with it.  After he heals he has no idea of what life has for him, but fate has decided on what he has to become

This is the story of a young lad by the name of Max Drago and his adventures.

cover is downloaded from google and have no rights to it

 

Author's Note:  This is my first novel.  The story has a traditional harem with one male and lots of females, no sharing.  The MC ends up being OP, but who doesn't like a badass right?  Anyways, the book has sexual content and mature rating.  

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the perfect mc without flaws

The novel started off fine enough but most story beats are quite convenient for the main character. At the start he is young and foolish and gets lucky but gets hurt. After that he gets trained in weapons, medicine, scouting and turns into superhuman who can do no wrong. The story tries too hard to make the main character into this cool powerful guy with barely any struggle he just....trained. It was just to much for me and i dropped it at chapter 9 . Author needs to re-examine the book and not bend the world around the main character.