The Guardian

by Loto06

He wasn't physically among them, but was still among them.

He couldn't talk to them, but he could guide them.

They couldn't see him, but he could make them sense him.

He became their guide, their ally, and their guardian.

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This is a god-mc story in control of a civilization. Lots of POVs and world-building

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If You Like Overseer Read This

Reviewed at: Chapter 6

the style and genre remind me of overseer but i love the more fantasical setting and SPOILERS..................................

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 I also just love the god mc genre.

Anyway try it and if you dont like it then dont read anymore of it.

 

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