Legends of Pandorus I: Song of A Crimson Angel

by Secariel

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"And the angel fell from the sky light a bolt of cataclysmic lightning. Screaming down towards the earth, the failed creation dropped into the depths of the Underworld, where everything is broken and soiled. However, the red brightness of his wings shone like a beacon, a symbol of his past grace."

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